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Happy Very Late Thursday / Early Friday Morning! 

Thank you all so much for your continued patronage, I really really appreciate it. I released a chapter I wasn't happy with earlier in the week and it was at 2.5k words. It felt like half of a chapter that didn't really progress the story much. I decided to go back to it and try and improve the flow and pacing. This one is just over the 5,000 word mark. 

I'm genuinely really happy with how it turned out and I think it did a lot better. I was able to get a Dark mode, but when I save it, it reverts back to white, which is useless. I'm sorry! Just know that I'm still working on it! 

In this Chapter, classes are revealed... more flavour is given for the Sponsors. A couple of Cameos from the Patrons appear and there's a nice little twist at the end. The next chapter will finally revert back to James because it feels like a thousand years since we last had him in a chapter. 

Let me know what you all think! 

James

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Gabriel

I think this turned out better than the previous one. It would be interesting to find out more about the shareholders/sponsors at some point.

Brian J. Nordon

Thanks for the feedback, Gabriel. I'm much happier with it. The shareholders / sponsors will be in various chapters throughout the storyline, I'm glad that they're interesting enough to want to know more about. :)

Gabriel

The story has been really enjoyable so far. :)

Miguel Canarte

It did flow better and I can't wait for the next one

pookadook

So goood. Loving the story so far. Have you ever read the story daedalus btw? It's an older royal road story that ended after a pretty good run and a couple of amazon books. Your story is on par or even better and has a similar vibe

Brian J. Nordon

I haven't actually heard of it before. I'll look it up tomorrow. Since I'm writing the type of book I'd like to read, it sounds like something I'd probably enjoy! :) Thank you for the kind words and the recommendation.

pookadook

Also read the gam3 as well!

Cymi

wiiiiiiiiii! wonder what the reaction to Kell being in game will be from the reporters lol. loved his smack down of the investor...