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Hi Everyone, I cannot explain or express my surprise at finally getting to this point. Book One is complete, well, at least the first draft of it, anyway. I'm going to be going straight over to Book Two in the coming days, and I genuinely foresee it being a lot easier. There were a lot of barriers for me in the last few months. Majority of them were mental. It was my first time wrapping up a story and having a conclusion. Please let me know your thoughts. I did my best to put in enough information to answer the people that wanted stats... but leave enough intrigue to want to read what happens next. 

Just wanted to give a huge thank you to everyone that can read this message. You've supported me in achieving one of my greatest dreams. I hope the story continues to keep you interested! 

Thanks so much! James 

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Jacqueline Rose Blair

This was a really good ending for the book, He rises up from the dirt, blood, and sweat and grew as a person, and he seems to want to help others do the same. I really enjoy James as a character both in-game and afk. He really needed to be in the spotlight and took way better to it than he thought he would huh.

Brian J. Nordon

Thank you so much for the comment. You're officially the first person to tell me how you felt about the entire story as a book. I'm just delighted it was positive feedback! :)

Miguel Canarte

this will be interesting keep up the good work

Foxsotired

Really nice setup for the next book. Looking forward to whatever you write next.

Penguin Glutton

Love the ending! Gj bro! Can't wait for the next book!

TheFoud3er12

That's a lot of characters you about to write. I'm really hoping you don't get burnt out.

ShadeByTheSea

I really liked this chapter. That ending too, so much better than a cliffhanger.

Will mILLER

It’s enough to make a grown man cry

Zehn

This was simply great! From Chapter 1 to the Epilogue I eagerly read every word. Underdog stories are always the best, especially in Dystopia settings like this one(At least I assume it is). Watching James’ growth as a person and as a character felt smooth and always had meaning to it. It would be nice to see of James Silvester’s life outside of Abidden in the next book however - not that there was too little here, just that it should also get some focus. All in all, a very enjoyable read! My favorite part of book 1 will have to have been when the Paragons all met up again for the first time in a decade. Looking forward to the next installment!

Log Daniels

Yeah can’t wait for book two!!!