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(Ch. 3) Getaway (Patreon)

Published:
2025-02-23 21:32:36
Edited:
2025-02-23 21:33:25
Imported:
2026-06
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Content

Alexis becomes the island's the next victim, while the group makes their way to the discovered fresh water. Nicky gets quite a shock by what she finds upon her return to the pond.

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Comments

deepediamcs

Had managed to wait to chapter 3 before commenting, quite a decent mysteries build-up, though I feel it is still too quick for Travis to reveal the nature of the land, I was hoping that our castaways didn't know too much and blaming the island so fast, so we had chaos and distrust amongst the castaway, fingerpointing that each other are the culprit before slowly realize the nature of the land. Well, but if it what it needed for the narrative to establish our 'Sherlock' and 'Watson' (Kurt and Travis) for this story it's understandable. Waiting for the next chapter, and more mysteries. I still hope there more fingerpointing, and distrust amongst the passenger though in the coming chapters.

bookread1331

Great story so far. I'm really enjoying this one!