Redline/critique request 10 (Patreon)

Are you guys enjoying those weird doodles? Do they help understanding the explanation? xD

And this is it for critique requests for now. I decided to leave it at 10 for the time being as I'm going back to my studies again (school practices finally! Yay!).

Depending on the success of this type of reward I may offer them again for free occasionally, it will all depend on my busy schedule :'3

For now I think I'll only offer 1-2 slots on the future reward level as I don't want to be caught up in too much work. I'll most likely try to make the official announcement by next week ~

Once again thank you so much for all of you who trusted me to critique your works. And I also wanted to ask you something.

After seeing all the different explanations I've made on the critiques, do you think I'm doing this well? Are my explanations easy to understand? Did my words offend anyone? Do you think I missed any important stuff on the critiques?
(maybe I'm just overthinking it too much but I get really anxious thinking I could upset anyone with my words >w<)