"An Excess of Mistresses" comment/feedback post (Patreon)

So, as I mentioned, this month I had to do a complete 180 and come up with a different story than the one I had planned on posting, because the accompanying artwork hasn't been completed on time.

I decided to make a (very) short original story to upload instead, for which occasion I had an unused piece of art to go with it. I am trying something different with the narrative here, and I am not sure I like it, so you guys be sure to tell me what you think of it.

And for everyone who gets what the story is referencing; I applaud you.

Click here to access the updated PDF folder.

The artwork by Gary Roberts is going out now to members of the art tier(s).
Any comments and feedback on the story? I'd love it if you were to leave them here!