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This one was really rough for me to type up and edit. Been feeling down about the state of my writing on this one. Let me know how you guys think of it.

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Cryodrake

Another dragon?! Ruwr row raggy. Also I liked the fast thinking that Lyndis did there at the end. The chapter flowed well though did you mean true sight goggles instead of normal sight goggles? Also the hive part was good though I think you should include at least a comment on why the lizards left a back door open. Last thing being there are a few typos and mix up with a few "there" vs "their".