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In which Cordenth retires for the evening, lays down with his beloved and gets interrupted by a siigonis most rudely! Don't they know a dragon needs their sleep!



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Cryodrake

Good chapter, clever in using the rangers lust against him lol. My only suggestion is changing calling all mortals human to humanoid or two leg or something else. Or at the very least change the references to Lyndis to be half-elf. Also, “Don’t look down on a good scroll friend, they can…Fuel the mind just as well as anything you’re carnal acts could accomplish.”, the you're should be your. O and KIN is Kobold Intel Network.