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In which Lyndis and co come across the control room...

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Cryodrake

It seemed to tremble in her grasp, even it too afraid to linger in this place. (Think there's a typo) “Mother…Dead?” Cordenth pressed back against the wall in shock, his paws trembling. (The mother dead part I'm not sure, I think its grammatically correct but I'm not sure if mother dead or mother died sounds better.) She laugher, her voice practically a whisper as her face turned blue (typo with laugher). But overall this chapter went well and took a dark turn for the worst.