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I actually don't have much to update on, since I'm just working on the comic routinely. But in the meantime, I can show you a bit of its early version that got scrapped back in December.

It had a lighter tone compared to how Point//Zero actually ended up, but that's not the reason for me ditching it. Really, I wasn't satisfied with the character writing and the pace felt way too fast - I was really rusty at the time and I could feel it.

I'm not gonna post all of the pages because it's a little embarrassing. Or well, maybe I'll post more some other time... I only drew and lined 8 of them, so it's really nothing in comparison to the 22-page scene I've scrapped a week ago, haha. I guess this early run was a kind of warmup for the rest of the comic.

It's funny how you can tell I was coming fresh from ZATO here, with how round everybody is. The way I draw the characters now has them looking significantly older... It fits the tone, but this cuter look definitely had its appeal.

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Myffi the alienn

I love you mentionning that you purposefully made the zato chars rounder than the way you draw for pafl bc ive been thinking about it a lot

Brandon Ontama

Unless if it's too much of a spoiler. Could you summarise the tone of the comic and ending of it in one word? Just curious

Gabri Katto

Anya discovers her father at the end???? OMG I CANT WAIT IT LOOKS SO GOOD I LOVE PAFL I LOVE FERRY AAAAA

Luna

I truly love the way you draw expressions ;w;

Crodolog

I hope there'll be a way to access all the cut pages, even if behind a paywall Id love to see a peak behind the curtain

rage laurence

I love how wide eyed everyone is....my little bugs....

jayden

sanya plushie soon...... :3

jayden

ME WHEN MY SANYA PLUSHIE ARRIVED TODAY

Ferry

THANK YOU SM but also she just found some cargo delivery plans lmao

Ferry

ive been trying to come up with a response but i really cant phh. if we're talking level of seriousness, of all the pafl episodes it's probably closest to the mill

Ferry

thank you so much!

Ferry

HOPE SHE BRINGS YOU JOY

jayden

SHE HAS BROUGHT ME SO MUCH JOY