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[TWS] Chapter 411 – A Trip Into the Dark [HIDDEN] (Patreon)

Published:
2024-06-13 18:32:16
Edited:
2024-11-06 05:45:10
Imported:
2024-06
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TWS

Content

Chapter temporarily hidden for verification or due to exclusivity of Kindle if it happened.

If it did, the chapter is now available on Kindle Unlimited or will soon be: https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0DKL18KK6

Comments

MyseriousMage

Shortly after they return to the dragon realm you have this mouthfull of a sentence. "The only question was, how much hung up the mentors were on their old ways." I personally found it slightly confusing and had to actually stop and process what I was seeing, I think it would flow much better like this. "The only question was, how much the mentors were hung up on their old ways."

Captain Rex

Ughhh noooooo!!!! It's over!!!!! 😭

Jonathan

You should probably switch Umbra's last line to something like, "I'm glad you brought snacks, because we have a lot to see."

Kai Solarie

I think Umbra's last line(s) should be "We have so little to see and so much time...scratch that...reverse it" :D

shifter1987

Aww man you missed a Golden opportunity there. He should have manifested with a tuxedo and be all Alfred-like or Sebastian-y.