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[TWS] Chapter 434 – The Golden Shell [HIDDEN] (Patreon)

Published:
2024-09-26 23:34:41
Edited:
2026-02-28 14:55:54
Imported:
2024-09
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Comments

Silver Reamalus

I can see merit for both skipping the remaining facilities and including them. If the result is Ast just absorbing them into his Black Heart, I would lean towards skipping with maybe a short recap.

Ralph

My vote is to skip ahead,shorten up the finding of the last pieces!

Steven Bartels

I still want Althea to get her turn absorbing a cluster.

ArendJK

"The outer edges of the tho marked constellations"

Zachary Ross

I'm going to need a full exploration again. Don't speed run the fun stuff.

Jon Walker

Gotta see him send some of it into his red heart too might as well.

Alex V

I thought Silvia is going to get an upgrade because of her Sun lineage. It seems like it's light adjacent 🤔🤔🤔 I feel like this adventure is cool, so you should take your time with it

Bob Bryan

With the facilities, I do like the interaction with him/the girls and the power. Plus if he could teleport Bryn to him inside his dragon world and get her stronger, that would be fun to see. Fun ideas are also fun.

Timothy Langin

I think most everyone will agree it depends on how big of an impact your ideas will have? If it’s just dumping more power into ast I would speed run it if your going to do something like you did with miria I would take my time so you can explain the power up.

Bryan Marshall

Speed run the last two facilities pls

Jacob

If the last facilities are just repeats of the others I would rather speed running them. If you have ideas to make them unique or to give some other characters unique power ups then I wouldn't mind reading them. It just depends on your plans.

Benanno

Speed run please this is just my own opinion but want the realm over now

Clinton Walsh

Overall great so far. My vote at this point is speedrun with those important things sprinkled in. I’m assuming some of that is recruiting/explaining to the locals what the heck is going on… I mean, if they want help from the locals later to fight the brightness dude then they should open a dialogue with some of the stronger entities at some point.

Lynderyn

Gloss over/speed thru repetition, spend time on new. i.e. feel free to start inside the last structure outside of a weird wing or extra room that shouldn’t exist or mural depicting who did this or evidence of who sent Kayuga to play as i think it may be not Red who put here there

Andrew Jenkins

Unless you have something drastically different planned for each facility, I'd just write about who got powered up with each one before coming back to the seal.

Julian Lachner

Im all for a Speedrun, i just skimmied through most of Umras Reaml iif im honest, it just is lacking something but i cant my finger towards it

Tavern

Speed run please, unless as someone else mentioned, another party member gets a cool huge boost in power. I’m ready to get out of the dark! 😁

bishop083

If the facility itself is going to be interesting, or if another of the ladies is going to get an interesting upgrade, I would enjoy reading that. Otherwise, I would rather move ahead. Overall, I did enjoy this chapter. Finding out that the light-based individual hid the edges of the seal along with a massive aerial facility was an interesting development. It also makes me wonder if this is indicative of their usual approach. I know the next story won't focus on them, but it will be interesting to see how that plays out when we return to that.

Max Ventres

Speed run unless there is growth for the ladies.

ArendJK

We're 21 chapters in And have covered 3? Cores in that time Honestly, I'd rather have something come up, completely unrelated to the cores, that detours Ast and the girls for a little bit Instead of speed running to them having already collected the last two Like the lost colony from Bryns world

Quinallsin

Id like a speed run if possible. This seems to be taking a long time with not much progress overall.

Dayak

So um this chapter there is a paragraph with abyss called he and the last chapter had a paragraph where he is called she I’ll let you check I tried to copy paste both last chapter and this and for some reason wouldn’t let me so ill let you find it. Dont want the mistakes hitting paper lol.