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David Hoerner

Noo! You can't bring in Larisse and then end the chapter! Now I need the next one even more!... Though to be fair kinda expected her to show up. Great chapter!

Aaron S

I know its not much, but thank you for having Ast lose, or at least be losing.. I know the kid's a Mary Sue, but its worth at least PRETENDING he's not.

Kconraw

Good fight. Good that he still has a lot to learn. Thx for the chapter. Looking forward to the reactions in the next chapter.

Rizeres

Lerisse: "I'm retiring. You damn kids keep trying to shock me to death. One of these days it's going to work. And don't give me that smug smirk, would it kill you to warm me ahead of time?" My take on how she will react. lol

Puggan Se

"it escaped him with a surprising speed and another one smacked him down unexpected strength like a fly with." feels like "with" ended up 5 words to late.

Ralph

Awesome chapter! The fight of his career! , and you ended it with Lerisse investigation the disturbance because it was close to the temple. Nice cliffhanger.

CHoobler

This would have been an amazing way to have brought in kaguya who sensed Dragons near her “home” instead of Lerisse