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Lynderyn

I like how everyone was along the lines of ‘don’t blame me for what happened’

AceSenko

Certainly one hell of a birthday present

Luiswu

Hahaha… Surprise!

Bob Bryan

Did zegion just try to adopt the elf queen?

Tavern

It’s cruel to not release the next chapter quickly ;)

Tanner Lovelace

I realize it’s Asterios’s birthday and so for the celebration it’s all about him, but I still feel like Tina has been left out a bit lately since she was given care of Glimmervale just as much as Asterios was. Yet, recently it seems like it’s all about how Asterios is the governor and Tina is just one of his many women rather than the actual Governess equal to Asterios. Maybe I’m just misreading things and while I realize the story is all about Asterios it feels like Tina’s role has been minimized lately.

LoridianX

I am not sure I get how Tina is able to remain in service of another king when her soon-to-be husband has just became an independent king. It's one thing to say they "accept" it. But it is anything but practical. Also, would Tina not be a queen, as opposed to a princess when they finally (someday) get married?

Rizeres

Welp Ast is King. Time to make some heirs. Lol.

Puggan Se

"It’s shameful to admit, but you’ve been doing a better job at caring for her than her parents should.” feels odd, maybe the last word is missplaced?

David Salinas

“That would be one hell short of a war.” Asterios rolled his eyes. Feels weird. Wouldn’t it be “That would be one hell of a short war.”?

Worlok

Well, all I can say is good chappy. and Beware of caniving merchants mothers.

Andy Barber

As a Independent leader Ast is much more free to conduct business. Great Story Direction can't wait for next post.