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Not going to lie, I could have posted this yesterday and washed my hands of it, but...

It just wasn't up to snuff.

I had to do some rewrites because I just wasn't happy with how the latter part of the chapter turned out. I'll admit to being very very glad I did so. The rewrite turned out much better than what I'd slammed out in an attempt to make the self-imposed deadline I'd set.

In any event, I spent most of the day hanging with friends and playing some MtG, but I had enough energy to finish the rewrite tonight. Here's the result.

I'm still planning to have one more update out before the end of the month. Look forward to Industrious: Engineering Marvels before then.

Until then, though... rock on, stay awesome, and thanks again for all the support. I literally couldn't do this without all of you.

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Speedrun: Chpaters 23-30

23: "You look different than I thought you would." I shrugged at the first words Toph spoke to me when we met again in a quiet field outside of the city. It wasn't too far from the underground arena where the tournaments were held, but there was enough distance between the two for it to be is...

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