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Industrious 5: (Patreon)

Published:
2022-10-13 12:11:23
Edited:
2024-12-28 12:18:19
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2026-06
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This, at least, came pretty easily.  Kota's still in the ramp up, be he's pretty sure he has some time on his hands and wants to make friends and have a life outside of his constant tinkering and work.  Only time will tell if this is a wise decision or not!

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Chapter 1: "Hey, mister." I called, standing at the rear of the shop, looking into the sweltering heat of the blacksmith's forge. "Eh? Whatcha' need, kid?" The stern thirty-something asked, mopping the sweat and smoke off his face with a wet rag, his mask discarded nearby. "You buyin' for th...

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Vanathor

The "superior ninja wire" thing might backfire seems like. One of those minor improvements over what everyone else has that with a few more like it could earn him a file in some konoha intelligence nin's cabinet that makes it hard to leave or go independent later on.

thevolunteer

Why Shii Cho? It seems like the absolute worst for a ninja. Ataru, or Djem So makes way more sense. Heavy slashing strikes either with acrobatics or a focus on counter attacks.

thevolunteer

Hell even niman, replacing force usage for ninjutsu would be better than Shi Cho

Vanathor

Shii Cho according to the star wars wiki was the transitional art from when Jedi were moving from metal swords to lightsabers. Given that Tenten isn't using a lightsaber or some sort of chakra blade that makes sense from a foundational standpoint

Slayer Anderson

As Vanathor notes, Shii-Cho is an excellent foundational style and is taught to all Jedi initiates for a good reason. Beyond that, Tenten doesn't have a chakra blade, lightsaber, or something like the Second Hokage's Sword of the Thunder God. Shii-Cho's teachings are almost universally applicable to mundane sword combat, especially when you substitute chakra-enhanced reflexes and strength for the force. I'll go into the full reasoning in the next chapter, but that's most of it.

Slayer Anderson

Next chapter is going to be Obito and Sagara grabbing a drink and catching up. Even in the Elemental Nations, its pretty freaky for a barely-trained ten-year-old civilian to be able to muster the kind of strength to actually forge a sword. Beyond everything *else* they noticed.