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Industrious 16! (Patreon)

Published:
2022-12-13 13:23:31
Edited:
2024-12-28 12:25:57
Imported:
2026-06
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Okay, my weekend turned into a weird mess, but this is done now.  I've already started 16 and want to have that out in a day or two to make up for this being late.

After I've got another chapter of Industrious down, I'll be working on a chapter of Speedrun or something to keep my energy up.

Once again, thank you all for helping me get to the point where I can focus on my writing this much.  It's very fulfilling to see people liking what I have to offer this much.  I hope everyone is staying safe and having fun during the holiday season.

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Industrious Chapter 11-20

Chapter 11: I clenched my fists so hard each knuckle popped in sequence as I stared at Obito, my eyes tracking him off to my right side and my face blank. The obvious answer to his thrown gauntlet was to refuse.

Comments

Hangwind

Uh...I only see 15?

Vrenze

Yeah, 15 is the latest chapter on document.

Slayer Anderson

Gdocs sometimes doesn't like to properly reload a document and just uses the version cached on your computer/phone, especially on the latter. I promise that Chapter 16 is in fact there.

Slayer Anderson

Gdocs sometimes doesn't like to properly reload a document and just uses the version cached on your computer/phone, especially on the latter. I promise that Chapter 16 is in fact there.

Cave Johnson

Oh, sweet baby cheebus, Kota now has a line to the most busted technique in Naruto without Sage chakra. Once he gets going with he his going to be dangerous

Slayer Anderson

There's a hidden danger to the technique that makes it a bit more complicated than that, but where would the fun be in a curbstomp?

Bob Saget

While I wasn't enthused on the inherent implications of Yakumo's inclusion to the fic on principle because she's from filler, Slayer's done a good job with it so it doesn't matter. And indeed, clever way to take her abilities to a logical conclusion. And of course Kota would be interested even outside academic curiousity, since he might not ever be able to use sage mode without melting his brain, and he's a creator himself.

Wildebranch

Is that the 'Demon' thing that's inside Yakumo?

Alexander O'Brien

I always thought it was weird that she was benched, considering how horrifically overpowered she could be. I also think it's why Kurenai gets such a bad rep, that and the itachi incident. Though I also thought that her passenger was a nascent tailed beast at the time lol Is there a reason he hasn't sunk a charge into her clan bloodline ? Apart from it would be boring

Tyric Gaias

Where’s the fun? A lot in my opinion. However, only if it’s done well

Kurlinni

Wasn't a big fan of this chapter. It was a bit too "technical." The best way I can compare it too is a Star Trek fic with too much technobabble. Decent enough to get something moving, but I'd suggest not doing too many other chapters like this.

Vanathor

Really? I liked it. More interesting then hand wavey harry potter magic explanations where the characters just shrug and go 'it just works'. And on a meta level going into the weeds of a magic system for an Industrious Inventor story where part of the storytelling is what is being unraveled tech - or in this case technique - wise.

Hangwind

Any idea how to clear the cache then?

Slayer Anderson

If you’re on your phone, it’s usually just a matter of going back to the front page of the app and pulling down on it. Not closing the docs app, just pressing and holding your finger down and pulling, then releasing. That usually triggers a little loading wheel. If you’re on your desktop, go to the url bar and hit enter instead of just hitting the refresh button. This will usually force the doc to query the source.

Esp

If it's enforcing a change in general, could she use it for healing instead of wounding? Like prepare a painting of a team mate, and add the background on the fly, to pull off something like Izanagi. I dunno how specific you could get for repairing insides, but I could at least see someone reattaching limbs that way. I guess if the genjutsu only takes when they run through their stamina, it would still incapacitate them, but it seems like it could have some application.