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Well, here we are, the last chapter of this story for 2022 and it's a Might Guy interlude.  Yep, that's a curveball for me, but a happy one.  This one is mostly a look at how Kota's getting his bruises and how insane Guy's training can be.

I'm going to try and get something else out before midnight Saturday, but in case I don't I hope everyone has a Happy New Year and I'll get the new poll up shortly after the first.

Stay safe and thank you again for all of your support!

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Industrious Chapter 11-20

Chapter 11: I clenched my fists so hard each knuckle popped in sequence as I stared at Obito, my eyes tracking him off to my right side and my face blank. The obvious answer to his thrown gauntlet was to refuse.

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Axel Wate

Have a happy new year! And thank you!

araconos

Am i missing something or has chapter 19 not been added to the doc yet? It ends at 18 for me.

Slayer Anderson

I promise it's there. Some apps and browsers don't load directly from the doc storage and instead pull from your local cache which means they miss out on new additions unless you force them to reload the document. Phone apps are especially bad about this, but the fix is easy. All you have to do is push the app to refresh the document.

Johny5

As more and more jounin of Konoha find out about Kotaro. Stories will be swapped, some people won't know the meaning of operational security, or shut up, and spies? Spies will do as spies do.

Noctis117

I know I have a habit of skimming through and not fully reading but when did plan "act and a prodigy blacksmith" turn into plan "fight a jonin and prove to the whole village I shouldn't have been kicked out the academy" aka plan "speed run to getting killed or kidnapped by either Zetsu, Obito, Orochimaru, or Danzo"?

Sksk4128

The moment he caught the attention of the main cast and slowly building his harem

Bob Saget

To be clear, I'm not at all complaining with the direction the story's taking. I like all that's going on on the ninja training front. It just seems appropriate to point out that in the original experiments where they boiled frogs in the 19th century, the ones who didn't jump out of the water as it grew hot didn't do so because they had had most of their brains removed beforehand. Does this perhaps mean Kota's thinking with another head? Also, so close to being right about the manly tears. DIdn't know Gai could hold them in for so long.

GAMB42

Guy is indeed the best ninja. Poor Kotaro's plans are really wishful thinking now... I am also extremely interested in how the timeline is going to develop in this AU. Some of the changes are very amusing. Having both Itachi and Obito along for the ride is incredibly amusing. We need some more interesting interludes. Wonder when we gonna actually have confirmation on the status of the rest of the main cast. So many interesting fates are still in flux. Kakashi, Neji, Hinata, Pein and Danzo just to name a few.

Benjamin Hower

I love the idea of Rin as Guy's rival. She's criminally underused in canon.

Slayer Anderson

I am actually aware of that, however I'm appealing to the popular misconception.