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Industrious Chapter 20 (Patreon)

Published:
2023-01-06 13:21:48
Edited:
2024-12-28 12:28:06
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2026-06
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Well, the poll's almost out of time, it'll end tonight at midnight so make sure to get your vote in if you haven't.  In the meantime, I feel like I should probably get to work on fulfilling the will of the people.  Next up may be more Industrious or I might hammer out something else over the weekend real quick.

In any case, thanks again for sticking around in the new year.  You guys are awesome!

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Industrious Chapter 11-20

Chapter 11: I clenched my fists so hard each knuckle popped in sequence as I stared at Obito, my eyes tracking him off to my right side and my face blank. The obvious answer to his thrown gauntlet was to refuse.

Comments

Whale A

Am I the only one who can't see chapter 20?

Doggi

So he gets more charges when he's porked out on chaccra majic i see

Wildebranch

So, every 20 chapters he's going to get one more charge?

Doggi

People ask this every update, you are reading a cached file not a new one

Alexander O'Brien

I thought it was Uzumaki chakra bullshit but this makes far more sense lol

Whale A

How do I fix that?

Mr Crowley

I fix it by loading in, immediately exiting from gdoc, then just going back in.

Rockinalice

With the path of Sagehood/Enlightenment he is going for and with how many of his students are geared to Sei (even Naruko she is technically extremely talented with Sage Arts which take being good at Sei) he might want to look into Personal Techniques: https://kenichi.fandom.com/wiki/Hayato_F%C5%ABrinji he techniques are made to be increased by chakra and https://kenichi.fandom.com/wiki/Seik%C5%ABken and https://kenichi.fandom.com/wiki/Ry%C5%ABsui_Seik%C5%ABken would be a good arts for all of them to learn especially since it's can extend to weapons but also it fits his Style of getting the most out of the least amount of power. There is also https://kenichi.fandom.com/wiki/Akisame_K%C5%8Detsuji and his body restructuring (making nothing but Pink tissue), which would be insanely useful in naruto with Chakra able to push it further. Which would be good with https://hokuto.fandom.com/wiki/Hokuto_Shinken the Itachi/Madara/Kenpachi of the Gentle Fist plus it would mix extremely well with the Bendu Arts and the path he heading of Most with Least. Honestly Personal Techniques: https://kenichi.fandom.com/wiki/Ry%C5%8Dzanpaku would probably be best it would probably give him insanely knowledge on Martial Arts, how to Train Monsters, medical Knowledge, the Secrets of Steel (Blacksmithing that beats modern tech),

Whale A

Thanks. For some reason loading in and exiting wasn't working. Apparently I had to delete it and load it all over again.

costochondritis

initially i was quite interested in this fic, but the last 10 chapters have very little mention of tinkering, i think the fluffy tutoring parts are ok but it's not what got me into this story.

Rockinalice

I think the only reason he isn't Tinker at the moment is because he has been waiting to get all of the Sage's Teachings so he can do the Creation of All Things which apparently require insane amounts of Chakra control, some Enlightenment, and lastly enough Chakra to Make what you want. He probably is getting close with part 3 of the Sages teachings, so now he just needs the Control and Chakra Capacity. Once he has that, he should be able to start really tinkering. Right now I think other them getting the teaching of the Sage he has had to make sure the Girls are Ready for Part 1 and also he got distracted with Dark Chakra and that it means the Demons and other things from the movies are canon so he has multiple Invasions coming in a year or 2 that the people he cares about aren't ready for. So he had to spend points getting the Skills needed to prep them but also himself since he knows that no matter the big Brain he has, he is in a Verse where he will be Assassinated, Kidnaped if he isn't careful or physically strong enough. So that slows him down by having to invest other places. Don't forget it's only been a few months and he has already gotten to the level of high Chunin or low Junin and this is about 1 year before part 1 since Tenten just Graduated.

Scott W. Pike

How would he get enough chakra wasn't the whole reason he didn't become an ninja because of his weird chakra limitation?

Mark

Problem, chapter 21 is missing. Please fix. 😜

Slayer Anderson

Multiple possible contributing factors, experimentation required.

Slayer Anderson

We'll be moving into more hardcore tinkering soon now that Kota has more of a path set out for himself in terms of how he's going to go about teching-up.

Slayer Anderson

As stated in the chakra, he's been accepting donated chakra from Naruko and Satsuki over the past week to finish Tenten's chakra blade, so he's been flooding his system with extremely dense and powerful energy.

Jake V

Food for thought. Since he can accept and use external chakra perfectly fine (as shown by him using donated chakra from Naruko and Satsuki). He should probably learn how to use nature/sage chakra (if getting Hagoromo II and III didn't already cover it). It would shore up his biggest weakness.

Vanathor

I thought donating chakra was a part of the Uzumaki bloodline. How did Satsuki help with that?

Bob Saget

So, summarizing some theories. 1. His capacity expanded so he can take in more energy, thus more charges. 2. Naruko's unique Ototsuki/Kurama/Uzumaki chakra made it happen 3. The extreme density of Naruko's chakra made it happen 4. The combination of Satsuki's and Naruko's chakra (two halves of the six paths chakra, maybe) let it happen. 5. This is just an occurence that happens from time to time as with the Double Blue Moon.

Flygar

Great chapter! Got a wild theory. Is Daisy the bunny a real bunny, or designed to pass away (creation of all things)/is he hurting the bunny? His thoughts sounded guilty when Satsuki mentioned the bunny being sick. could see him gifting a sick pet (or one with a short natural life) that he knows will pass away, unlocking Satsukis sharingan.

Vanathor

Agreed. Large oversight, massive error.

Eibon Alain

So this story will go for Slice of Life? The quality hasn't gone down, but I'm already pretty burned out from following so many of the kiddo Naruto that they have not passed the chunin preliminary, so I prefer to ask directly.

Slayer Anderson

It will vary. I'm looking to hit more politics and plot very soon, but I'll be keeping slice of life as an intermittent theme.

Axel Wate

I would like to ask why is he concentrating on Hagoromo techniques so much? wouldn't be better to either develop further some skills or research something else?

Bob Saget

1. Creation of All Things 2. Ninshu/Chakra Sharing 3. Potential other bullshit like Sealing schemas and Artifact creation. But it's explicitly stated he's mostly after creation of all things insights.