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Industrious - Chapter 33 (Patreon)

Published:
2023-04-16 01:52:32
Edited:
2024-12-28 12:40:15
Imported:
2026-06
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Man, fuck this week.  Just... fuck it.

I won't bore you with the details, I'm just glad its over.

On the brighter side, I got the chapter done!  Woo!  I'll think about what I want to work on next.  Maybe New Ron?  Have to see after I spend tomorrow recovering.

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Industrious 31-40

Chapter 31: Satsuki watched as Yakumo and I prepared another series of canvases and metal frames for the tertiary testing of a new gate. While the project had been officially taken over by a group from ANBU's research and development division, the body language that the masked individuals had g...

Comments

Chancelor Delamare

Ah, Kota... you've found another Kohai! And this one might actually be able yo jeep up when you ramble about 'Bullshit grade' Chakra Manipulation and control. This is going to explode beautifully.

Whale A

I'm a bit confused here. Sometimes I feel like the pronouns when Kota is talking to Sakurai are wonky. Is it because they're non binary, did you write the chapter with the gender flipped or am I just drunk and seeing things?

David Hedges

I noticed definitely at least two errors (might be more) where you write she/her instead of he/him when talking about Sakurai.

Slayer Anderson

Thank you for bringing it up, I was writing while tired and slipped up here and there. Think I got them all, but if you see more, mark them in the doc and I'll fix them.

Slayer Anderson

Thank you for bringing it up, I was writing while tired and slipped up here and there. Think I got them all, but if you see more, mark them in the doc and I'll fix them.

Zerak

Same that was disorienting to read.

Zerak

I think he should tell itachi about the secrets he knows about Danzo because a good deal would have likely died with him and that shit will come back to bite the village later on. Also it’s mentioned by others but you keep mixing up He/She with sakurai.

EVA-Saiyajin

Sit down,” I ordered her. Should be “him”

EVA-Saiyajin

Sakurai opened her mouth to reply again, but caught herself as her mind began truly considering what I was saying.

EVA-Saiyajin

I’m sorry about your week, I hope things get better.

EVA-Saiyajin

I leaned back and nodded to her, waving a hand. “Good luck.” That was a good scene in Dark Knight Rises. Though this should should be “he”

GAMB42

That conversation was so on point. Poor early Sakura really was that naive. And now Kota is going to be dragged along so he does not turn into meat paste after a couple of missions. It would be amusing if it wasn't so damn true. Sakurai without team 7 plot armor would never survive outside the Village. And having confirmation that Neji is a missing nin is quite amusing. Lots of butterflies all around. Finally Enma is a thing ? But how the hell did the fourth die then ? I would not expect Naruko of all people to have an younger brother.