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Not too much to say, other than the appearance of a probably-recurring character and possible love interest.  It's about time for that.

Otherwise, look for another chapter of Industrious later this week and, uh... something else?  Maybe?  Part of me still wants to write more Nexus Event, but I might end up doing a chapter of Speedrun or Where Your God Is.

Mystery Box!

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Winning Peace 12-20

Chapter 12: I'd tried, but as much effort as I'd put in, we still weren't quite at the point of a classless utopia. Don't get me wrong. Part of that was, frustratingly enough, the people themselves. It turns out the vast majority of humanity liked having something analogous to social classes, t...

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GAMB42

The only real problem I have with the dialogue is that the critic seems incredibly shallow from any semi pragmatic point of view. The entire story revolves around how one man, with one hell of a super power yes, was capable of stopping the total destruction of mankind's civilization and is well on the way of trying to start an actual golden age. And then some people try to criticize him about what he did and is doing. Without actual alternatives being brought to contend with his view and actions. It seems almost childish really.

10moorem

That’s people in a nutshell.

TravelerOfTime

The weird thing is, I’d pay a lot of actual money to see a good animated Remake of Hoodwinked. And I’d ABSOLUTELY pay a shitload to watch a good Empowered Trilogy.

Evilhippy

I'd be worse. "I have deathrays and warbots. Shut the fuck up or else."

Austin

Love it so far

MadGreenSon

"Aperture Science Technologies" ... We will do what we must because we can

GAMB42

The more I read the more sure I am this entire fic is inspired by Command & Conquer. The GDI vs NOD comparisons just make themself up. Only real difference is that there are 2 Kanes, one for each side.

Zerak

Well I hope the Last Dogs plot line is wrapped up soon and we move to the Mass Effect aspect of the story. While I have enjoyed your writing I have not enjoyed the Last Dogs part in it. But hey it’s still enjoyable to read. For the record I just binged the story as I was putting off reading ti for a while.