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Sorry, facing a bit of writer's block and needed to freshen up my brain.

Once, in the long-long-ago I mentioned this as a possibility.  Basically a, 'What If?' of Kota actually becoming a shinobi instead of being an obstinate jackass.

May or may not get more parts to it depending on the reception.

Hope you enjoy.

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Industrious: Road to Ninja

Chapter I: "So, what's the plan?" My teammate, Tenten, asked as she sidled up beside me. "Yosh! We will emerge victorious and bring glory to Konoha!" Lee, on the other side of me, exclaimed as he punched one fist into the open palm of his other hand.

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Joe

Very good looking forward to more and hope it helps bring the other along 👍

Austin

I like it would be nice if he added shi Cho and makashi to his style as well

Axel Wate

Sounds interesting; I would still vote Where your God is though, but I won't lie and say the thought of Ninja!Kota has not passed my mind. The problem that I see is that his chakra problem would still be present, although maybe his pool might be slightly bigger. I'd suggest to learn the Edge of Taixuan, it would be a fantastic addition to the team with Lee and tenten, plus it would basically work out mostly of spiritual energy, while the training I think would make genjutsu ineffective and strengthen the body

Konan2020

For the among of Potential he was spending to help Sasuke/Naruto I would love if he just decided to go under the radar and became a ninja and after he became a chunin or special Jonin he could start to implement some changes

GAMB42

So Kakashi is a she in this AU ? Didn't notice that before. And what is it with the white hair/ blue eyes combo ? Is it some technique side effect ?

GAMB42

My mistake. Though I am actually curious how that started ? Rin is supposed to be the most level headed of kakashi's original team so I am surprised Guy decided to turn her into his rival. I would expect Obito to "fill" that slot really.

Bob Saget

Looks like Senjutsu use turned his hair a special white. Regarding interest, it’s less compelling than Industrious due to not being as mould breaking, and my desire to see Industrious itself advance rather than it’s spin-offs.

John

Huh, so he didn't get any thing in Metaphysical Physiology to figure out his powers? Otherwise he has far more points and has dumped a lot of them into far more combat, or directly supporting combat, than your other story. Well, outside of getting anything from Otsutsuki Hagoromo. Edit: TenTen: Hold up! Were is the backstory were I was reduced to mush in bed? I demand a re-do! At least I don't have to worry about the others trying to muscle in on him.

Ronin Katarn

I actually like this as I would always wonder how Kota would do if he tried exactly this.