Home Creators Posts Import Register Favorites Logout

Poll

Vengeful Bonds Poll - HELP!

  • Fool around 9
  • Get off without the whole penetration thing 65
  • Fuck 309
  • Cuddle and talk 49
  • Something else (feel free to shove ideas in the comments) 10
  • 2024-02-17
  • 442 votes
{'title': 'Vengeful Bonds Poll - HELP!', 'choices': [{'text': 'Fool around', 'votes': 9}, {'text': 'Get off without the whole penetration thing', 'votes': 65}, {'text': 'Fuck ', 'votes': 309}, {'text': 'Cuddle and talk', 'votes': 49}, {'text': 'Something else (feel free to shove ideas in the comments) ', 'votes': 10}], 'closes_at': None, 'created_at': datetime.datetime(2024, 2, 17, 23, 27, 57, tzinfo=datetime.timezone.utc), 'description': None, 'allow_multiple': False, 'total_votes': 442}

Content

It's me, your brain dead, self-doubting, omegavirgin author asking for your help once more. I am writing a Loch chapter where all of those left in the house are very horny, Loch and Saint find Fenny and Seth all over each other outside of Ollie's room and take them each to their rooms to...distract them. Since Loch and Fen have already fooled around, I'm not sure what to do next. So I'm leaving it to you guys. Majority rules because I'm currently drowning in self-doubt and writer's block. I'm going to go eat my body weight in ice cream while you guys decide. Oh, and if you guys choose something else I'm just going to pick a comment at random. K, Bye

Do Loch and Fen: 

Comments

Trae

I say go for it if he’s in heat. So make it so he is in heat lol

Sophie Williams

I promise you our choice will always be sex you have an audience as thirsty as seven 😅😅 Like the house is too horny as well for anything not jumping bones 😅

Shelby Holder

I think they should fuck (separately at first *eyebrow wiggle*) and then end up in a cuddle pile on the couch afterwards.

Krissy K

I'm kind of down for cuddle&talk... then fuck. Unless I'm forgetting something I feel like there's still some unresolved issues there with not talking after the store. Unless we still want those for later in the book then the fuck option!

B Johnson

While I would love to see them dive in head first (pun intended) I can also see them letting off a little steam while but deciding that more talking is necessary before coming to terms w THIS PERFECT PACK YOU’RE CREATING FOR THEM (and us, your rabid fans!!!)

Jayce

fuck, but like, with Seth and Saint watching and getting off together separately 🥵 if not with Seth and Saint, then defs fuckin 😂

Lauren Gibbs

Oh they should totally fuck! But honestly I'm down for anything, you're killing it with this story! 😍🌟👏🏻

Mel Blood

Foursome-ish. Seth & Fen get off while Saint and Loch watch. Or direct.

Stephanie Hilton

First, as far as self doubt is concerned…stop it! I get you’re your own worst critic (as is known to happen). But please know we’re not going to judge you like you judge yourself. And anyone who tries can get fucked sideways with a 6 foot cactus (feel like maybe Avi would try that move). As far as omegaverse, you’re killing it! We’re all enthralled. Some books barely make it past the first few pages before they’re mated, marked and pregnant (nothing wrong with those either, all in what you’re looking for at the time). I guess what comes next depends on where the story goes after this. For the most part, we’re going to jump to sex (because you write one hell of a sex scene), but sometimes that’s not what’s needed for the story to progress. That all being said, it sounds like Fenny and Seth are either in heat or about to be. Deke is evidently throwing out some massive alpha pheromones if he has the whole damn house keyed up.

Kara

I'd love to see some more Loch/Fen one on one time before we start intermixing with the whole pack, but as with all these votes I am 100% okay with all options! This is my absolute first read into any type of omegaverse, and it has started me dipping my toes into other omegaverse series. Please take that as a sign of you are crushing it, and I wait *im*patiently for each new chapter release 😄

Lottie Duren

Definitely some talking and then maybe some getting off….however it goes 😉 also my favorite intimate nonsexual thing in omegaverse is always going to be omegas nesting with stuff that smells like their alpha and having nests for comfort and it being special to be invited into a nest etc etc so I think it’d be cool if like, fen was anxious about the last sexual encounter with loch so he made a nest and invited loch into it to talk and then they had sexy times in the nest??? Personally I’d go a little feral for that

Bethany Sehl

Tell that self doubt to get out, we love your writing. I am all for fucking but I also think there needs to be some cuddling involved? Maybe talk, sex and then a big puppy pile ( with as many of the pack as possible).

Natiuskat

Cuddle/talk/fool around combo?

lisa karsen

Totally agreeing with Hemlock... fuck while Saint and Seth watch

כרמל בן שושן

You are amazing writer and do not talk to yourself I'm loving the story I can wait till the next part I know you can do it and everything you got we will take it

nicole monroe

I get the self doubt, it happens to me too. I am here to tell you your brain is lying to you. Also one of my favorite things is having the characters dirty talk to each other while edging. I think it would be really hot if they did like a dirty future talk. Like some day I am going to...

RM

Why go to separate rooms? Fen and Seth should fool around while Saint and Loch watch

H

I feel like they’d want the first time they fuck to be private and not influenced by other people’s hormones!!

Lisa

All four fool around together

Enay QueerBooklover

I’m honestly not hugely into omega verse books but am LOVING this so hard!! You’re doing such a great job. And I agree with the others - it’s time for them to fuck & to move forward to a bit of poly!

Natasha Outridge

They should talk it out then fuck. Feel like they need some resolution after Fen’s freak out.

Joelle R

As much as I’d like to say give in to the baser instincts, I feel like given Fen’s response to the first hook up, something that show Loch’s sincerity would hit so much harder in the long run.

Nuha

What about seth and saint, let the chapter be about them please

Kayla McCoy

Fucking, but also snuggles. Loch being super freaked by snuggles after but trying for Fen.

Reese

I feel like given his freak out and adamant inclusion of his fellow omega, he would feel safer if the other two were in the same room, maybe with light play between omegas to anchor him and ground his anxiety.

artsychauna

Personally I feel like they should watch saint and Seth navigate their physical intimacy and … help