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I think it's just about done? I'm trying to make her look adequately shiny but I'm kinda missing the mark. It might just need some light reflected highlights in the shadow areas. Either way, I'm gonna hop off of it for half a day and work on other stuff.The problem might be that I've over-rendered it? Like maybe the hands and stuff are too busy. All in all I'm happy to be mulling over a piece for a while! And you guys get to see all the versions of it that the public wont!

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seraph_

Holy wowza

BlueFlameFK

She's so beautiful (both of them)

hitsujigoods

One other thing, I'm gonna make the safety and sights stainless steel instead of black.

Cherry

Maybe for lighting add light gleaming off sweat for the dark spots ?

hitsujigoods

Oh shit wait, I know what it is. The hands are waaay more detailed than the face which is what's throwing it off. I need to rebalance it

Chase Tokutaro

The itty bitty steel tweaks aside it looks so perfect to me! Kara is just glistening with this gorgeous backlighting ✨✨✨

BlazeCrow

Maybe a little reflected light on the eyes?

James Jr

Looking good 👍

Nixie

I am LOOKING

AmiWright

This is looking incredible as is, full stop. If you add some bounce light from the ground plane back into her more shadowed areas, while giving her face and eyes the same rendering love seen in the hands/gun, you'll have one of the best depictions of Kara you've ever made. If you are into it, maybe do a focus pull on the gun making it sharp and right in the viewer's face, while the rest of her has that gaussian blur making the fun bits all the more elusive/alluring. Regardless, this is super well done Hitsuji!

Miy Eterp

Oh wow spicy art of Kara with her Beretta M9! :D Anyways happy Halloween which I miss ya cryptid skinwalker gal Corbett with deer antlers at some forest.

hitsujigoods

I'll give it a shot! You're definitely on the right track. The gun should be the first thing the viewer sees, followed by the face!

Miy Eterp

Yeah u too! So might Corbett return in the future?

The Animator King

maybe some slight lighting on the (pubic)hair to show it as a shiny substance will help tell the eye she is shiny, maybe some lesser highlights on the eyes as well, good luck figuring it out after you have that break from it :)

Skullingto

Whoops, hit send too early. It sounds like you've figured out what you need to do to improve it already, I do agree that like a second set of more subdued highlights opposite from the existing ones (to give the impression of light bounced off the ground) would help sell the shine. My only other note is that I'm struggling to figure how the light would reach only the belly button, but I'm guessing that could just be a stylistic choice to highlight it.

SwordsmanJack

This is a pleasing amount of bush

Elmo Almonte

i cant think of a better girl

bkr

Glorious! 😍

Julia

😍

Meika

happy halloween 🏳️‍⚧️!

Bluhgingo

I don't want to sound too drastic or extreme but I think a girl like Kara doing this to me would litterally fix all of my problens

Playzholder

GAWD! this already looks great!