Moving Forward (Patreon)

So the main plot of this book was to show Maggie that if she continued on this path, without help or support, that things could get dangerous, blackmail, risk, jail, and losing the things she cherished the most like her friends and family. After hearing all of your suggestions I'm starting to feel that may have been a little too extreme of an idea. So I'm considering a change in direction as I'm only in Ch 2 and thinking maybe Natalie may be a good thing. Maybe having someone she's known and is comfortable with show her a way to enjoy what she wants, safely but still with the bit of risk and fun she likes without it getting too out of control where she's risking it all just to get a sexual high. So what do you think of that? Too...cliche or a good path for her to follow into book 5 which i'm still keeping a secret till 4 is done.