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Happy 300 pages. This kicked my ass. The rest of the book is all two page spreads of the launch sequence, so my ass is going to be kicked more. Expect slow progress. I will probably reduce the schedule on the public webcomic site because it's apparent I'm not going to be able to keep up. Posting 3 two-page spreads a week is equivalent to posting 6 pages a week in terms of workload. I'm continuing to find my limits with work by slamming into them at full speed. Like usual. There's probably errors on this spread but I'll worry about it later. Bed time.

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Origamigryphon

Definitely slow it down a bit!! Take care of yourself!

rey

this spread is super impressive!!

Rapaz

your work is always amazing! take all the time you need

Curona Crescent

I’m low-key excited for Talita’s relief that she’s finally escaped. And in a ship that is already engineered to fit her, without Talita having to do it herself.

NexusEye

Take your time. Reaching the finish line is more important than trying to reach the finish line quickly, falling down exhausted, and never reaching the finish line or only reaching the finish line far later than if you'd paced yourself. So don't push yourself to the breaking point.

zaratustra

just put the camera in outer space and have a tiny spark fly off the planet. that's the ship. they ran away. to the stars

TinyBluCat

I'm squealing because I just noticed the little tail pouch on Gillie's suit 🥺😭💙

Hemocyanin

These pages are always worth the wait, hope you get some good rest Jay!

Merlin

The little tail bit on Gillie's suit is adorable??? Honestly that whole panel with both Gillie and Talita's "helmet hair" is really cute.

Marine Verdancy

In addition to the helmet hair panel, I love the shot of Gillie really getting into strapping the supplies down

Montydragon

I love the flow across these pages. Almost feels like a memory of Talita's, a blur of images. These double spreads are beautiful, it's important to take time on them!

Kathleen Smith

Congratulations!!!! This has quickly become my favorite Patreon and I only just joined. Love the comic, love your worldbuilding and characters, and love your engagement. Please take care of yourself and schedule/build in rest breaks for yourself -- I'm grateful for your dedication but would never want to put any pressure on you.

Scout

Bip’s giant welcome message is adorable. They are no longer constrained to tiny tablet screens!!!

SenGrisane

I know it is more work, but man are those pages awesome! I am almost as excited as Talita and her crew!

Unicorngirl 3008

Gillie’s hair being messed up from the suit is interesting!! I’d assume it’d be messed up in general as suits squish the hair but I can see there’s an inner lining that made it sweaty, such a cool detail!

enigmew

I didn't consider that GMH suits would have little tails??? gillie's suit grub tail is so charming to me. along with her terrible helmet hair. hopefully there's good temperature control or AC on the runaway

Jacob Schwartz

Gillie's expression in frame 3 is such a MOOD!! Also, do centaurs cool down through panting? Is that what Talita's doing in frame 3?

Jackalgirl

Take your time! I love that you've captured the universal thing about spacesuits (that I imagine; never had one, but have worn EOD and fire-fighting suits): the happiness you feel when you can get OUT of them!

EdenArtFactory

I like how talita can't help but check idrisahs and gillie work after being low key traumatized with the experience of being the manager of those temps lol.

Thisfox

Just post a two-page spread a week until they're done. Many comics don't post more than once a week, it's not a crime to drop to the equivalent of two pages a week dammit. Also this is remarkable and wonderful and we are all enjoying the hell out of every page you make.

It's Not Blue

fanning herself? saying thanks? both probably

Spooky Daddy

Yeh maybe once a week will be enough

Adrienne R

While there are some mistakes, they are very minor, and these panels turned out extremely consistent! Here are the possible mistakes I caught: PANEL 2 -on Gillie's glove, the seam shouldn't go between the pinky and ring finger, but around the far side of the pinky. The joint mobility padding on the fingers likely does not need to be visible from this distance, but could potentially be added -the seam extending down from the armpit and leg of Idrisah's spacesuit isn't consistent with other human spacesuits, including Gillie's PANEL 3 -if this is the same way that Talita entered the Runaway on page 203, the grate is on the wrong wall. However, it is very possible this is a different entrance and probably fine -Talita is missing the joint mobility padding (or whatever it's actually called) on her lower front legs and right arm at the "elbow" creases -the seams on Talita's left glove should possibly be as defined as they are on the right glove, though this could also be completely fine because of the angle -Idrisah has a seam extending down the leg of her spacesuit, Gillie does not -Idrisah, Gillie, and Talita's helmets should possibly have at least one latch visible -on Gillie and Idrisah's gloves, the seam shouldn't go between the pinky and ring finger, but around the far side of the pinky -the dial/switch on top of Idrisah's radio interface by the round knob is missing some of the detail it had on the previous page (possibly fine) PANEL 4 -if this is the same shirt Idrisah was wearing in the earlier pages, it should have a seam going down the front of her chest PANEL 5 -Idrisah's shirt doesn't need to have a seam extending down her side from the armpit I did this for fun. If unhelpful, my apologies and please disregard.

Thisfox

Oh! Is that what that panel is about? Thankyou!

BakedBananners

i agree with others that you can just post a page once weekly instead. no need to overexert yourself in the final stretch!! <3

Alight

Yay! Page!

Deneb

Gillie's suit tail is a fantastic detail

Jacob Schwartz

With regards to the grate in the airlock, I went back to check because I'm curious, and it IS a different entrance! In chapter 7, Talita enters through the port airlock, and here they are entering through the starboard airlock, so it's a mirror image! (At least, that's port and starboard so far as the ship is mounted on the ground. I'm not really sure how ship directions work on a ship where "fore" and "aft" are also "up" and "down," respectively).

Donny K

Ahhh, I'm so excited for launch <3 And finally hallways that fit Talita <3