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SI 2: Pleasure Land p. 23 (Patreon)

Published:
2020-05-14 20:26:20
Edited:
2023-08-28 21:47:57
Imported:
2026-06
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8 patrons till 500! Thank you so much!

By the way! Which story arc do you like more? Daisy and Grant or Betty and two guys next to the pool? Or they both cool?

Even though I have some story outline, you still can suggest edits and plot twists because I'm drawing every page right before publishing! And I can change anything any second))

UPD: That's page 23 of course!

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InkstainedFox

I'd like to know a little bit about Daisy & have her give the longer explanation necessary for exposition.

JP

I enjoy both story arcs!

Dalton Remy

I enjoy both arcs, both are interesting and sexy! I might be leaning towards Daisy though, likely because I named her. Lol If I may, I would suggest in the final publishing on this book, to spend two pages on Betty/Couple, then another two pages on Grant/Daisy. It story flows alot better when it switches every two pages, instead of switching back and forth between each page. This doesn't necessarily mean you can't upload them here going back and forth between the different story arcs, but in a final publishing, it would flow alot better if they switched stories every two pages.

blackstone

I like daisy a lot!!! But I must say I enjoyed Betty's arc a bit more, not that there is something wrong daisy she's amazing and beautiful. But I felt that Betty and the two strangers arc were more sexy and engaging. And I really want to see Betty take Enrique!!! And grant have some fun with sabrina or lita.

Randomuser2018

Well if you really wanna go next level you could make it a choose your own adventure style story! Want Grant to hang with Daisy? Turn to page x, Want Grant to return to Betty? Turn to page Y. 😁 ( or perhaps this could be a future project idea ). But really I love both story lines and want to see more of Daisy but I think it’s time she took a shower and sent Grant back to Betty with the promise she would definitely want more time with him later.

KingdomMHA

My vote is for Betty and two guys