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SI 2: Pleasure Land p. 30 (Patreon)

Published:
2020-06-08 06:52:27
Edited:
2023-08-28 21:50:03
Imported:
2026-06
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Actually, first sex between Betty and Grant on pages!Do you think someone can interrupt them? They still have open door...😏

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Yurii Furtat

Немного не понял. Нижняя фраза на последней панели - Бетти? Тогда не должно быть что-=то вроде "It feels so good to have you inside"? Потому что текущий вариант предполагает совсем другие роли партнеров. :)

Dalton Remy

Love this page. Art is great as always, and the sex and chemistry between them is hot. Great to see Grant and Betty finallly going at it. You've already had them start and be halted twice now, so honestly It'd be tiresome and kinda predictable if you have it happen to them a third time. I hope for their sake and ours they can just finish (figuratively and literally lol) what they started. And hell they're at a swingers resort, might as well fuck with the door open. Lol

Chris

I like the way you draw him fuck her. In that position it is not easy to get his butt right but you did a marvellous job! I hope he is fucking her ass in the next frame.

Dalton Remy

If you want to have them be interrupted in a more interesting way, you could have them start having sex and right as their reaching their climax, having Betty shout out another mans name (I would suggest Ricko or Enrique). Grant would of course get discouraged. Betty would profusely apologize, telling Grant it just "Brought her back to that moment at the beach" (if she screams Ricko's name) or she just "Got excited by the couple outside" (if she screams Enrique's name). Grant leaves saying "I need to be by myself". Later on when Grant goes to sit in a hot tub, pondering why he's here at the resort and his relationship with Betty. Then have a scene where another one of the guys at the resort (This would be a perfect time to introduce Daisy's husband, he's older and more experienced so I can see it working really well) approachs the hot tub. He asks to join Grant and gives him a pep talk, encouraging him to be more courageous and confident in himself if he want's to compete with the likes of Ricko and Enrique. Even going as far as to tell him "Fake it till you make it". I think you know where to go with the story if you decided to go that route. I honestly love sharing these story ideas. I love to write so suggesting these potential stories into Swinging Island is really fun for me, and I hope it gives you plenty of ideas to. Not only to make this comic more sexy, kinky and fun, but also add some emotion, drama and character development into it as well.

Randomuser2018

I think let them finish but when they turn round one of the couples has been in the doorway watching and maybe having their own fun ( you could cut between the couples here and there maybe but make it obvious that they aren’t aware of each other ). Then they say it was wonderful to watch them etc and hope they can experience something with them later OR they sneak away without Grant and Betty knowing and they whisper to each other walking away they really hope to do something with them as another ending to the scene.

Kotchka Images

I seem to have missed something - where are the first 29 pages?

Per Thomsen

Is this true? I have to lower my pledge to see the first 20 pages? That doesn't make sense...