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I'm insanely proud of these new pages! I even consider them genius! Second page of this week (and all the following) is gonna be great as well..If you don't like the look of the party (neon and red lights) I've made a second version with normal lighting. Tell me which one do you like more, or should I do 2 versions of every page?

Also, I'm back in Russia on 2 weeks quarantine after the flight.. I hope to be very productive..

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Kaplun_Arthur

Дальше все интересней и интересней!!!

Randomuser2018

I think I like the natural light. Can’t explain why.

blackstone

I think natural color is better !!!

EDCBeerGeek

The natural is certainly easier to look at...BUT I think that narratively the neon is necessary. It highlights both the “party” atmosphere, but also serves to highlight how novel the experience is for both Grant and Betty. It might not be necessary to use it as day/night differentiation tho. And perhaps the neon slowly fades out but night 2 or 3 as they give themselves over and the hedonism normalizes for them...

Dalton Remy

I think it's really cool how you got both neom lighting and the regular lighting aswell. I'd suggest making different versions of every page at the party. The more the merrier! Some are bound to like the natural, others might like the Neon. It's also kinda like getting a bonus page too. When you print this book, you could have one page in neon and the next page the same page but with the natural lighting. That way the reader can kinda decide which they like more while they read. And they can also see the dratic differences between the pages. Stay healthy, and keep up the great work Andy!

Joseph Carney

I think for the story the neon works best,

Maxikiss

Натурально - привычнее конечно. Но неон создает эффект клуба, камерности. Типа там освещают только неоновые лампы. Задники с пальмами и небом не прорисованы и кажется, что всё происходит в "элитном" помещении :)

Joshua Ohmer

They're both beautiful! I'm not sure which I like better. The red light certainly fits the narrative, but it is also nice seeing it in natural lighting.

Redisoj

С неоном интереснее, атмосфера клуба.

Chris

They ARE amazing. The neon and red has more atmosphere, is more intense while the normal colours make it more sexy. I love both and would definitely like to see more 2 versions.

Missouri_Viking

I liked your idea of having the red colors for the nights and the lightrer colors during the day, but more options is always great too!

Timur Suleymanov

Так отменили же карантин для прилетающих? :)

Jens Bang

I really llike them both, but I think the neon lighting works better for the party.