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Hi! First I wanted to make Grant came first and Betty had to blow Pack.. But then I read comment from Dalton and he said: "Besides Aimi saying she wants to blow Grant being a hint, Grant has c*m early a couple times in the series. It would be too predictable and not satisfying to have him do it again." I agreed.. I don't want too many predictable things. So I changed my mind in the last second.

Also the most recent comment Bleepity Bloppity was "I guess you’re obligated now to include Finish Him!" So I did! It's a great idea!

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Charles

the final move is very nice :)

Charles

before that, a close up view of the two lips kissing with some of the cum, could look great

Randomuser2018

We need to see the two happy ladies chatting with cum all over their faces before the action moves on. Was the “FINISH HIM!” a fun reference to Street Fighter like the side by side panels previously was. I took it that way and it made me laugh.

Dalton Remy

Ayyye thanks for noticing Andy! Nice to see Grant's stamina is getting better! BTW, hot as hell to have the girls snowball like that! Keep up the great work like always!

Randomuser2018

Just a thought but dialogue may sound more natural if she said to Aimy “Pack might not be so happy when he realises YOU have to blow Grant now”. I think her saying Aimy in that sentence sounds unnatural like she is talking to her in the third person or something.