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You guys don't like dialogues in the comics..😤It was the same with the first part too.. Dialogues were odd because I wrote them.. Then, before publishing and printing my editor helped me a lot and re-wrote the whole story. And now you see it in the PDF. It will be the same with this one. Don't pay attention a lot to the dialogues. I'm not a native speaker and It will take super long to proofread every page before posting. You don't want it.

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Dalton Remy

We understand Andy! Those are the hurdles that come with writing in a language that isn't your first. I hope you didn't take what we (or atleast what I said) to heart. Just some constructive criticism. We tell you these cause we love you and the comics Andy 😉👍

Dalton Remy

Magnificent page btw, their reactions are great!

Charles

Excellent page ! We can really feel the girls are having fun. Nice colors too. That’s really cool

Dalton Remy

God Betty's ass in the top frame... oh my god she is so fine 🍑🤤

JP

I'm fine with the dialogues. You do this how you want to do it. I love the story and your art. You keep doing you.

Randomuser2018

I think I knew you would update it Andy and was just wanting to give some feedback for when you do. I know you can’t easily do it as you go along. No offence meant.