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SI 2: Pleasure Land p. 128 (Patreon)

Published:
2021-09-29 21:22:20
Edited:
2023-08-28 22:19:56
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So.. where did Rita go?

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Marcelo Borges Hirie

Hi Tarusov, on the previous page (p. 127), just a correction to Ricko's Portuguese. The expression he says is inverted, we Brazilians usually say "bom dia" and not "dia bom". Furthermore, congratulations on the art and script of Swinging Island, it's really hot!

Dalton Remy

How did they not notice Rita slide underneath the table. 😆 Ah, the old "Blowjob underneath the table", hot and a classic. I also notice Ricko's caressing Betty's thigh. I feel like we're gonna see some really HARD and SEXY stuff between both couples. 😏

Kaplun_Arthur

Я хочу срочно продолжения!!!!!

Stewie

I kinda think people are complaining about something that is there own making. Andy asked people for input and people where keen to give him about plot lines and ideas. But know these same people are moaning about the storyline and lack of plot, it all seems a little kick in the dick for Andy and I feel we all maybe need to be a bit more supportive, agree if people aren’t happy with stuff, give some constructive feedback but it all seems (personally) like it’s all Negative. Maybe we all need to stop moaning and let him carry on with his own plan. I fire one thought we where going to get more than one page a week which he promised a while ago, but I know life gets in the way sometimes and from what he shares on social media he seems to be in a good place with a smoking lady friend so understandably I would not begrudge only getting less that a page a week. Sorry rant over, Keep up the good work Andy and looking forward to where the story is heading.

Ramon Burgos

Character Development Betty: graduated from the Fash Designer University, he had an open relationship with Christian for two years until Christian met Nataly, a younger girl and double crazy that Betty, leaving Betty for her, Betty wants to have an open relationship with Grant, as he had had with Christian. Christian: young and handsome, with money, petulant and playboy, wants all women to do, he knows Rita from before. Nataly: young and pretty, like open relationships, groupsex and play with men, flirtatious, malicious and manipulative, much more than Betty or Rita, more perverted than Natasha Grant, graduated from the University of English Literature, met Betty and took boyfriends, and they went to live together, do not know and have no experience in free relations or swingers, until now monogamous.. Rita: administrator of a Swingers resort next to her sister's sister, has an open relationship with Ricko (they are not swingers, are an open relationship that is not the same). Ricko: Boyfriends rita, silent person, because he does not know much the language, let Rita do what he wants. Aimy and Pack, new swingers couple, lovers and want to follow the strict rules of swingers Beach: Grant and Betyy, had already had all kinds of sex, they had lived about 1 year together, Betty tells Grant who wants to go to a nudist beach, the couple meets Rita and Ricko and make swingers on the beach, first swingers of Grant. Grant and Betty, receive the invitation to Rita Swingers Resort Pool: Betty if she sees the couple having sex, and if she jumps semen, (as originally occurred). In parallel Grant sees having sex to the couple, he stays to see a little, but he goes, (change of script, Grant does not interact and returns only to the pool) when he returns to see Betty she was clean because he had been Tuck the pool. And Grant does not notice anything, Betty sucks at Grant but in the view of the couple but Grant gets nervous and escapes. Betty reaches Grant to the room, have sex and joins Lita, Grant meets Betty's help Club House: goes by all the same, Glory Holes, Betty is wrong with a penis, Grant is noticed the hassle, but Betty to calm him has sex in the room, Betty has no sex with another person because that idea is very silly, Then the two only in your bedroom bed, Betty mentions him if he wants an open relationship, Grant answers that he is not sure if he could blow it, at this Betty confesses to Grant that he is bisexual and the two-fall asleep dreaming. Grant on the other day, goes to the pool early and meet the girl's pair, think that Betty, had been wrong the night before in the Glory Holes room and lets the girls suck her, but he has no sex with them, such As I originally step, while Betty sees it through the window and goes to the massage room and passes everything that originally happened, Betty before leaving, asks for a towel to the masseuse and is cleaned, then leaves and joins Grant, Grant does not know anything about what happened in the massage room, a girl passes and she knew the soap party At the soap party, Grant and Betty, you know a Sports Swinger, Aimy and Pack, go to the sauna pool and have sex, not exchanged, as originally happened, it is the first time that Grant has sex in public. At the exit they are located with Rita and Ricko, these invite them to their bachelor party, they explain that women and man will be separated, Grant, think what Betty had confessed to him that he was bisexual and what it can happen, but he calms down knowing that there will be no men. Bachelor party : Ricko farewell, Grant enters, Natasha makes his show (here Natasha tells Grant, Gang Bang, and Grant knows what he is, he is very foolish that he did not know), and has sex with all, less with Grant, (here Change the script), Grant finds it very perverted, leaves the party to look for Betty Rita farewell: the girls have lesbian sex, come to the waiter, they do it in and have sex with all, even with Betty, as originally happened. Grant enters and sees Betty having sex, he is angry at the room, Betty after bathing quickly, he gets a dress, goes to the room and finds Grant. Betty tries to reassure him, tells him that he was sex for a few seconds, that if he wants to tie it can have sex with Rita, Grant Angry tells him, no, Betty again asks what she wants, which is an open relationship, Grant, it gets angry more, the other night I had answered that no, so I had cheated it, leave the room, to leave the resort, when the guards are coming to the exit, it stops and inform you that by resort rules, you can only Exit as a couple. While Betty runs Rita's room and tell her that Grant wants to go for what happened and help her stop him, Rita goes out in Grant's search, find it, try to explain that the mistake was from her since they left Take and tie it seduces it and have sex in the light of the moon. Grant is returned to his room, where he finds Betty, alone sitting, Grant, with a feeling between guilt and satisfaction goes to bed without saying a word to Betty, she also sleeps next to Grant. To the other day, Betty, is running up and tries to suck Grant, but this dreams with Rita, so I spend the night before and name it, Betty comes upset and goes to the Jacussi, think about what happened with the waiter In Rita's single farewell, he masturbates, but then, he feels a little guilt and he intends to have anal sex with Grant, since he knows he likes a lot and to get along well, he returns to the room (here is outside the submissive, since it is another idea that is more, even in the original script), bathes and is arranged, has wild sex with Grant, after having sex, Betty tells Grant that he thinks about having an open relationship and He tells him that he does not like that, but if he can accept a swinger relationship, since it is more traditional, (that is the conflict, which is developed, Betty wants to have an open relationship, while Grant that is monogamous, as much as can accept is a swinger relationship, we have the conflict, as well afterwards appear lo villain who are Nataly and Christian) . As an additional comment, the Swingers community, is like the Republican Party, is a rigid group, with several rules while the OpenRelationships are like the Liberals, I would not be surprised that the next war is between these two groups. Ready a coherent scroll, with conflict, character development, and open lines to generate more conflict to the future, only structured imagination is needed.

AnPie

Looking forward to what happens next! Don't worry about some of the comments. SI is your Vision. And yours only.