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Your ideas needed! (Patreon)

Published:
2022-10-05 11:51:45
Imported:
2026-06

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Hey guys! I'm stuck on Swinging Island again. 

We have two DPs, Aimi and Betty! Where should we go from that point? I mean to finish that chapter. I had something in my mind, but now I don't think it's very actual.Should Betty go dirtier and attract more men so Grant would be nervous again?Should they do something different after all?Or maybe some twist?We still have Rita's gang-bang, Ricko with two girls, Bi-sexual priest lines going on. It's better to say something about them too.Bring your bright ideas here, I'll choose something!

Thank you!

Comments

Andy Moore

Betty needs to go airtight, Grant can watch whilst he fucks others. Then Grand gang bang of Rita. Later Grant realises how much he enjoys watching Betty and cleans her up with his tongue.

seeparappa

Grant sees Betty, gets intrigued and comes over. After he watches for a bit, he musters courage and instructs the guys to dvp her. He then completes her airtightness and the three give her a mini-bukake. This could be where he really embraces the whole lifestyle.

Hastur

Ok, I've not spoke up here before. But I personally would love to see some of the other characters from earlier finally get their chance with Grant. Then grant comes back to see Betty and sees how much he loves the lifestyle, then joins in to finish with Betty getting covered in cum.

blackstone

Rosie could have a 1x1 with grant while he watches Betty go airtight

Martin Rasmussen

Perhaps its Grant time to “shine” and take the role as dominant. Perhaps take a wip, and control Betty and the guys. Making them all listen to him and do as he comands. Betty would get of if he takes control.

Z

Some more gay content would be awesome ;)

Goldmond

This is interesting because it seems so obvious to me. The answer has been building for a while. I first first saw it when Betty had the dream about getting gangbanged by a bunch of black men. After that she leaves and Grant starts browsing black on blonde porn. A story build up needs a natural progression in intensity and that has been happening too. From here the way I see it Betty has to get Gangbanged by a bunch of black men. It doesn't have to be only black men, but it should give a nod to and possibly make the reader recall the dream she had earlier. This is the dreams fulfillment. I think there should also be a moment where Grant sees it and it fulfills hidden secret fantasy that he clearly seems to have based on his porn consumption. I know a lot of people don't really want to see Grant go the cuck route, which I basically agree with, but I think there should be that moment, where Betty is getting Gangbanged and and Grant is so taken off guard that he stops what he's doing and just watches... there should be a moment that they make eye contact thus fulfilling a secret fantasy within each one of them. The story needs to move on from there and a great way to do that would be for Grant to embracer some of his masculinity, possibly inspired by all the men fucking Betty. I like the idea of him having something similar with at least 2 women and ideally more. That's something we haven't really seen with Grant. That would give Betty and Grant a type of shared experience: They both had their first gang bang with multiple members of the opposite sex at the same party. This could also be a moment that they make eye contact. Storywise it's Ricko and Rita's wedding but it's Grant and Betty's story I think it makes sense to bring both of their stories together with Grant fucking Rita while Ricko fucks Betty. I see this as a kind of celebration between these 4 friends. This could happen with just the 4 of them or as part of a Larger orgy of the entire wedding party which should probably happen. We don't want to loose our couple so I think it should end with Grant reclaiming Betty, he could demonstrate that the week has changed him by demonstrating greater masculinity, grabbing Betty and reclaiming her at the party or taking her to a private place where he reclaims her. I think Betty would be pleasantly surprised by a move like this and it would show that their characters and relationship have evolved over the course of the story. Anyhoo, that was longer than I intended it to be but that's how I see it...

Michele Castelnovi

To my taste, your artwork is better with the pinups dressed (or almost undressed). And (for me) the prettiest girl was the French maid. It seems to me that everyone at the party is a "guest." But the waitress does her honest job. In her uniform. Okay, I know it's faster to draw naked anatomy rather than lace, silk, stockings and aprons, however... that would be nice. - A French maid could walk in with a tray of glasses, pretend to be scandalized by the unexpected scene, scold the young man (Grant) with her finger because he's misbehaving.... You are fabulous at drawing facial expressions and finger gestures. - This is to conclude this scene. More generally, I wonder if it wouldn't be a case of introducing light bondage scenes sooner or later. Great painters of the 19th century left us beautiful portraits of Andromeda chained before the sea, or Prometheus, Ulysses, St. Sebastian. If Grant has to watch while his partner has sex with other men, wouldn't it be interesting if he had his wrists shackled behind his back? Think of the opportunities in drawing the taut muscles of his shoulders, biceps, and forearms (perhaps while meanwhile a French Maid gently caresses him...I confess, I would see French Maid everywhere...)

Ramon Burgos

Dear Tarusov and other patrons , first of all we must make it clear that the logic of the script that Betty has to do things to make Grant nervous , is negative , everything , but everything in a relationship has to be consensual , if it is not So, it's not sex positive, that's the minimum level of a relationship, once I've clarified this I find some strange comments, like Grant to embrace some of his masculinity, what the hell does that mean, it's like a medieval comment, but Well, what I can say is that this is a comic and comics have their rules that in the end the balance has to be balanced. My position is that Grant has to empower himself with his life and not be a retard of Betty, I understand some basic and simple logic of some who ask for cuckold, which means that this comic would be one more among thousands, he has to to be more disruptive and original , I think that Grant has to stop being a doll of psychological abuse , he falls into something toxic , he has to empower himself without having to have Betty , that is what generates balance , in that separation the balance is balanced and In these games they may or may not meet at the end, that gives the script a twist and is more original, so as not to go into details, I leave the scenes that can be experienced inside the resort to the creator.

Dalton Remy

Since I've already sent you all of my ideas for SI2 in that document (that and I don't have any new ideas at the moment lol), I'll let the other patrons take center stage for this one.

Jack

I kinda wanna see grant take charge and show Betty a new authoritative side where he does things without any hesitation to the girls from early pages and get them to reach orgasmic level or squirting at least Not saying Betty shouldn’t get pleasure as well but, by the end of this both should leave attracted to each other and be enlightened by this experience. Also, close up of those moments where sliding in or eyes roll are sexy….. just putting my ideas out there. 😅

Rasp9999909

Watching Betty get turned on by Grant's performance with another woman would be a realistic next step in building up Grant. Agree with Jack that both should leave attracted to each other and excited about doing more next time.