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Noah's POV - Delffum

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Noah's POV - Chapter 10 – Delffum

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at25041

So fucking hot. 🔥 Looks like the hospital (or just not climaxing for a week like he’s used to 😂) opened up Noah a little bit more too!

Zeb35

I like that Liam’s capable of surprising Noah. Noah is so good at reading people and predicting their responses, it’s fun to see him caught off kilter every now and then.

Marcio Dasb

yeah noah is on an arc of his own right?

Pup Curtis

I love that Noah got into this more than he was expecting himself to. I re-read this chapter from Liam’s POV before this dropped and was very interested is what Noah was thinking that first day in hospital compared to the last. His internal conflict with Liam holding his hand, his disinterest in Liam’s empty compliance (probably still in shock) and how that changed a week later after Liam sat in the room every day. I think Liam would’ve been to kind of person to just coast through life without somebody like Noah to take charge. And I’m pretty sure Noah is changing too and he’s just starting to realise it in chapter 10 …unlike Adriana who sees more than she lets on. What I like the most though is the idea that Liam means more to Noah than any other of his past conquests. I doubt there’s been anybody Noah’s done that to after he’s finished. Especially given the stitches 🥵🫠

Josh

The original chapter of this was hot, but Noah’s point of view is next level. It’s hard to explain, but being inside Noah’s head makes the story so real. It feels like there’s so much more detail for some reason. And, I mean, I get it, I love eating pussy too.

Grrgg

I was disappointed the fight wasn't from Noah's POV. It said what Liam thought and saw but didn't say what Noah saw and thought before running over and attacking. Bummer.