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Noah's POV - Tekcaj

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Noah's POV - Chapter 11 – Tekcaj

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Mike

Just as good as I expected. Noah is in deep. The way he internally speaks about Liam. Yeah, it’s dripping with condescension, but also dripping with true affection. I’m honestly not sure at this point who is falling harder and deeper. So satisfying and enjoyable to read.

Mike

I’m sure he would. 😤😂 Every time Noah is coaxing Liam along with statements like “Just let go, little buddy” I’m thinking, you do the same big boy. Noah seems to be craving Liam’s affection in more ways than just physical, even if he’s fighting it. And the annoyance at/interaction with Liam in the gym, while Liam was purposely pushing Noah’s buttons, just felt so intimate. Made me smile. Noah’s character is just so interesting to me. He’s obviously so so so so sensitive, yet his edge is also authentic. Shows authentic internal conflict beautifully. One other thing I found Interesting is the obsession with what he eats and drinks. I read the breakfast piece as yet another indication there is some past of Noah’s that illustrates his seemingly unhealthy need for control. It’ll be interesting to see if Noah can master being in control, via persona and sexual interactions (these things certainly make him extremely hot, yet give up enough control to really be able to experience a fulfilling relationship. Even if it ultimately isn’t with Liam. I’ve said it a bunch of times before, Liam seems on the path to fulfillment at a quicker pace than Noah. He seems more open to letting himself become who he has been repressing for so long. Noah, on the other hand, has quite an internal fight on his hands. Couple that with intense family trauma and it’s a recipe for possible disaster. Don’t let Noah crash too hard. He seems increasingly fragile. I want this dude to be OK.

Mike

Lucas, a quick random question. Is Liam written to actually have an objectively small dick, or is this Noah’s thinking as it relates to his own huge dick and his increasing sexual domination of Liam?

Eryndor

Aww man, this was such a fun one :) The phone call with his dad gutted me tho - literally had that same call almost verbatim a few years ago. The mental gymnastics to cope, or in Noah's case suppress and disregard is too real v_v Loved the little references and glimpses into future chapters like when he sees (or is reminded?) Liam's birthday is next week on the computer, or in both Liam PoV and Noah PoV, love that the snoring line is highlighted again in Chap 14 when Noah "has to go to sleep first bc Dylan snores" lol, wonder if the line about "Did she [Ashley] bug the place?" was foreshadowing that Detective Ash does, indeed, know about Liam and Noah o.o Also, deny it all u want Noah, ur lowkey jealous of Claire LMAO (or what Claire represents which is anyone but u) Also, to me, Noah was a slight bit cockier at times this chapter - which was interesting because it makes a lot of sense since he's annoyed at, well, literally everything barring Liam at present lol, like it was tantamount to the vastness of his other [ignored] feelings, perfectly misplaced intently And lastly, dude I know you're a writer but a poet too?? "He crossed the room, slow and loose muscles relaxed from overuse." hahaha

Eryndor

Oh mannnnn YESSSS its FR "baby" Noah ;_;, their banter and sides fucking wreck me, giggling kicking my feet type shit And yes! Especially Noah noting "Every time Liam gave in like that—had his little rush— Noah felt one too. " [The perfect loop]. Keen assumption on the clean eating as a method of control!!! As someone with a prior ed u right asf imo lmfao, also Adriana is so endearing I just love her lol Yes I hope Noah will be okay :( especially after Chapter 16 - emotionally, at present, it's like he just opened a bomb-strapped-radioactive box and inside was the Zuni doll from trilogy of terror on fire with a gun And canonically according to Chapter 1 Liam PoV, he is 6 inches! Noah just has a baseball bat whereas Liam has a rolling pin - IMO i think he just likes degrading/teasing him, and also lowk to him anything other than what he has is small lol

Mike

The perfect loop. I LOVED that. I mean isn’t that essentially what a “healthy” relationship is? Each partner complimenting and fulfilling the other, especially when each others “needs” can be construed as unorthodox by some. These two are more perfect for each other than either realizes. I love your description of Noah’s struggle! That’s a lot of turmoil all wrapped up! I completely missed the actual size in Chapter one! It’s been a long time. Thank you for lifting that.

Eryndor

Oh man don't get me started on my babies - they are the epitome of The Origin of Love from Hedwig and the Angry Inch ;_; to me lol; and their bond is deepening gradually as they both inadvertently help each other discover themselves through sexual and emotional exploration - it happened silently, and I don't think either of them realize it yet (Liam appears close?) but it's like one of them is driving a manual car and the other is shifting gears for them <3 its not a perfect road they're on, and they might have a flat tire along the way, hell the engine may even give out... I just hope they don't get out of the car for any other reason than to try to fix it and get back in :')

Mike

Great analogy! And I do think Liam is close. I mean if Noah just flat out said, “I have feelings for you, Liam. I want you to be my one and only little bitch.” Liam would be sent straight to heaven and immediately comply with all that entails. We are at a point where Liam’s reluctance seems less about moral/internal repression and more about a fear of doing/saying something that will cause Noah to pull away. Like we saw in 16, Liam all but point blank came out to Claire. He’s well on his way.

Marcio Dasb

he has a 6 incher, noah just likes to humiliate him

Zeb35

“Dumbass” Never has an insult sounded more like a term of endearment. 🥹

Jim

Another winner.

Mike

I felt the same way at that line. It only seems to get dropped when real feelings are creeping up.

Josh

You’re just getting better and better Lucas. So good. 🔥