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Noah's POV - Yats

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Noah's POV - Chapter 16 - Yats

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Mike

George’s commentary is certainly adding a layer of complexity to poor Noah’s struggles with what he is feeling. It also adds a layer to the Ashley situation that makes it a lot more messy. Ashley as conduit for a ‘normal’ life is more tricky than Ashley as a conduit to get Liam off the mind. Can’t wait to see where this aspect goes.

Marcio Dasb

dude fs, it’s why i f*cking love that u guys get to see noah like this

Pedro Henrique Domingues

It is actually pretty neat how different the story feels the more information we get about Noath. Being able to see what Noah goes through gives so much flavor to the story, and it actually feels different when we know what Noah is feeling. GL feels like a total different story when we have both perspectives to compare. And to be honest, it amazes me how deep Noah feels after being able to see his struggles

Josh

Noah with his dad was so so good! I really loved that section. And I’ll admit, I may have even shed a tear or two through there. I’ll be curious to hear what George has to say when he learns, it ain’t Ashley. IF George ever gets to learn it... :(

Eryndor

This wrecked me :( Oh it’s all so sick, definitely confirmed a fear I had about the situation and knowing "I Lied" is what’s going through his brain after this oh I’m gonna throw up man Also Noah had a definite affinity for “time” this chapter :o particularly in the 40 range, really curious about that - maybe during his post-fight spiral (especially with his dad’s diagnosis/Ashley thoughts, scholarship, etc) he kinda gets lost in or obsessed with “how much time he has for everything?” Subconsciously? Foreshadowing? Or maybe it’s nothing but very interesting to note either way OUCH but thanks for the chapter as always Luc!! ^_^ sooooo good getting to hurt with/experience/understand Noah 💔

Marcio Dasb

you know me i love to make you guys nut and cry, smts all at once

bullfrog31

I’m so excited to See Noah’s POV in the next three chapters. 🥹 I hope we get to see an internal struggle