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Noah's POV - Niar

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Noah's POV - Chapter 18 - Niar

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Silver S

Ok. This one got me. Noah has some newish self-generated issues brewing beneath that awesome and sleek exterior :).

ZoZoThing

Controversial... but I think Noah is more obsessed than Liam is. He has more denial and wants to please his dad.

Eryndor

Sweet Noah ;_; Not only is he emotionally avoidant in general, the one’s he is allowing himself to feel are pulling him in two separate directions 😭 we know what he ends up choosing, but I’m so curious and anxious to know how, I guess, “giving up” the ‘easy’, George-backed, ‘dream’ relationship/future sits in the back of Noah’s mind moving forward He chooses love/Liam over all else… Also I love the parallels of Ashley and Noah’s personalities. Noah, to most, is an ass and stand off-ish but we know with Adriana, George, Liam, Ashley, etc that’s certainly not the case. Much akin to Ashley being a see you next Tuesday to Liam, but she is very doting of Noah’s feelings; and doesn’t treat “the help” less than - in fact it seems like she thinks of them as family herself which also lets us know she’s not just a “bitch for bitch’s sake” Hmm. This was a tough read, but such a beautiful, poignant, drawing back of the curtains into Noah’s mind and emotions during the “breakup” Genuinely not mentally prepared for next PoV after this

Marcio Dasb

this! dude happy you noticed these little things, exactly, all the characters are real people, i loathe caricatures

Josh

I knew this chapter was coming. I decided to just brace for it, and then kept repeating to myself, “The only way out is through. The only way out is through. The only way out is through.” 😉

needitsobad61

This chapter really shows us the many sides of Noah. The loving son. A "nice" guy who can treat Ashley with tenderness and something approaching respect. An absolute monster of a sadist, mouth-raping the faggot at the bus stop, violently unleashing his internalized homophobia. The confused boy who is starting to realize he may have feelings for Liam - which he rejects as hard as he can. The horrible cad, hurling words intended to wound, who treats Liam like total shit while he stands there heart in hand. And, and, someone who goes out into the rain ....

ZoZoThing

Beautifully put. Sums it up with colourful words.