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Noah's POV - Doolb

All characters are 18+ and this is all fiction.

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Noah's POV - Chapter 19 - Doolb

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Silver S

Noah seems to have played himself alongside Liam. And he still is a hardass even when he is sweet. Thank you, the nice touch of feels and communication between them is very well written. Hope the many rewrites were not too hard on you

Marcio Dasb

dude legit the hardest chapter ive had to write lmao. glad u guys like it man

ZoZoThing

I like how in denial Noah is about everything. Boy needs either therapy or some good sense knocked into him. Both struggle to talk about real things, but Noah is really bad at it.

Silver S

Hope the next Liam's pov was easier and more fun to write :P ?

Usedtobe@yahoo.com

Why is he in denial? Total nonsense about therapy. He is an alpha. Full stop.

ZoZoThing

For one his need to be in a straight relationship. He idolises his parents relationship and feels a deep conection with his father. I do agree with the alpha comment but he isnt a full alpha yet. He is only 19, i imagine in another 5 years he will be unstopable.

Mike

Beautiful chapter. You really did Noah justice in this one. The raw, vulnerable aspect of Noah is so important to the complexity of his character. I truly am getting the most enjoyment out of experiencing both Noah’s growth and his setbacks. In my mind, alpha status is not what is in question, but rather his psychological and emotional state. He’s certainly the alpha in this, and every relationship. But, is he himself OK? Is he in pain, or actually as happy and in control as he appears? What is he doing to make himself more content in life? It’s these aspects that I look forward to ruminating on after each chapter. While Liam is 100% adorable and sexy as fuck, I still view him through a lens of how he/his actions will affect Noah and Noah’s journey of self discovery. Not the other way around. Noah’s got a lot of potential for contentment and happiness. I hope by 35 he’s fully realized it. Either that or 35 will be the crash and burn finale! Either way, I’m looking forward to it!

Marcio Dasb

dude that’s awesome never realized there were guys considering Noah’s pov as the main one

Mike

To be a true alpha/dom you must first master yourself before you can master others. That’s where the work comes in.

ZACHARIAH A COTTER

I mean, who doesnt want to be told that no one else can touch them.