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Gsr Melody

Great job, please add pink nipples, I'll be honest it's hard to like brown nipples.

Gsr Melody

Thank you for changing it. I'm still waiting for Yumi's (Yura) new story, always like your work.

soddl

이런것도 좋지만 지금은 꽁냥꽁냥 바보 커플 느낌이라면 선배가 본색을 드러내서 서서히 다른 여자도 손대고 유미의 자존심과 질투심과 존엄성을 꺾어버리면서 자기가 선배의 여자들 중 하나일 뿐이라는 위치를 납득시키는 2차 조교 전개 마려운데 아니면 본편 IF루트에서 그런 전개 쓰려고 아낄 수도 있긴 한데 자기 차버리고 하루를 골랐다는 걸 명분으로 이용한다던지

sungsung

IF스토리로 흑인한테 NTR당하는것도 보고싶네요

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nice the art keeps improving every time you post, even the live2D you're doing is every time better than before. I would like to ask if you have any plans to maybe continue the story (i know that the main part is finished, i mean like another mini arc like the punishment game) or maybe you think that since yumi and jin did it raw now there's no room for more story without going too much into NTR and not staying in the NTS genre? honestly i don't know if the punishment game is like a canonic continue to the main story but if it isn't you could create something else. Anyway Continue the good work with everything, i'm exited to see what you'll do with the game your trying to make.

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why would she feel jealous for the senpai, she doesn't like him, he's the one that's going after her.

Florian

koreans just view this so different lol

soddl

본편 정식 루트에서나 유미가 선배를 안 좋아하겠지 이미 선배한테 공략된걸 전제로 하는 if 루트에서 유미는 선배를 안 좋아한다는 얘기가 왜 나오나? 그리고 유미가 과거에 진실을 알기 전 선배랑 사귀지 않은 마지막 이유가 선배가 다른 여자 만나고 다녀서라는 건 기억 안나나? 거기에 아랫쪽 쥐흔충 양키 하나는 코리안 어쩌고 하면서 비꼬고 앉았네 작가도 한국인이니까 다르게 보는건 너인가보지

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oh yeah you're right. I think that yumi doesn't like senpai because he's a womanizer like you said, also i think that it didn't work maybe because of the character, since with haru we see a yumi that really like teasing him but with senpai it doesn't work since he's like the chad of the situation if we want to call it that way. But as you said she didn't date senpai even when haru was out of the situation like maybe they knew each other (haru and yumi) but yumi was on a sex friendship with senpai and after the yumi started going out with haru she basically lost the interest in senpai and she started using his character to tease haru more until jin got introduced (in the delusion we can still see senpai but other than delusions and backstory jin is the sex friend of yumi). Now on the last panel of the punishment we see her talking about meeting with senpai again, i think that it could be a good idea but i think that character of senpai is more for NTR stuff, instead jin as we saw when yumi say no, it's a no and he listen and don't respond back so we can save ourself and don't fall so we can stay in the NTS. Just one point i don't know if you know english or you're translating but english is not my first language so i'm 100% i made a lot of errors so maybe there's some phrases that you interpreted in a different way than what i meant.

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Also if you could explain to me how do you view the situation of this story, even talking about a possible continuation, other IF stories or i don't know you tell me

soddl

과거: 유미는 샤워실 씬 직전 선배의 여자친구가 될 마음이 있었음. 그 전까진 선배와 지속적으로 만나고 있었음. 미나가 개입해서 진실을 말해주지 않았으면 이번에 올라온 '선배의 유미'루트에 진입. 이때 마지막까지 유미가 선배의 여자친구가 되지 않은 이유는 선배가 다른 여자들을 만나고다녔기 때문임. 그래서 이에 대한 언급은 이후에도 계속해서 반복됨. 현재 상황과 미래에 대한 전망은 12시간 후에 올릴거임.

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I completely forgot about the shower scene and Mina, you're right.

soddl

추가 설명은 필요없겠네 굿

Elsexadordepollos

The author been dropping a lot of Senpai content, feels like he’s building up to something with him, but maybe im just overthinking it.

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It could be this also, but i don't know why he's going in the story when there's already jin that serves the purpose of the sex friend. Also i don't know how you see it but senpai seems more for deeper cuck stories like when the male also humiliate the mc (in this case haru) while jin seems more normal and chill (he knows his boundaries) but i don't know maybe it's just that i don't like those sort of stories.

Elsexadordepollos

I have a different opinion. As for Jin, I’m honestly fed up with him he’s super annoying with Yumi and clearly doesn’t know his limits. A good example is in the latest arc, where Yumi snaps him back to reality by shutting him down completely. I’d honestly prefer if they just introduced a new character instead. As for Senpai, well, this is more of a personal take, but I think he’s the closest thing to pure NTR... or at least that’s how I see i I apologize if it is not understood but I am using a translator.

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no problem i understood everything, yeah you're right jin cross the line sometimes but as you said yumi shut him off everytime so it's not that big of a problem, with senpai i think that this wouldn't work. I think that another character would be cool, maybe someone that's just interested in helping them with the nts fetish, not someone trying to steal yumi from haru. A woman would be good also we haven't seen the other black haired girl for some time

Elsexadordepollos

Well, someone with those traits would be nice, but that’s up to the author i’m not the one to tell them what to do with their characters; as for Sena, we hadn’t seen her in a while until just recently it’d be nice to get a bit more of her.