Works in Progress! (Patreon)

Here's page two (of four!) from the anthology I'm working on. I'm moving onto the next page but I have this tugging feeling that the composition of this layout could be improved somehow...

Maybe a lighter background?

Decreasing the size of the title?

Not sure. Let me know if you have any thoughts or ideas!

It's entirely possible that I'm just resisting moving on since this page was a lot of fun, and this is exactly the way it should look.