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Kuroinu Title 2.0 1/5 (Patreon)

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2020-09-05 18:30:08
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2026-06
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Out of the 4 drafts this is the better one, though simple obvious adjustments still need to be made, like the heads, eyes ect as well as moving Kaguya a little closer. But I need your guys opinions on what needs adjusting thats not so obvious, or hell dose the pic need to be changed all togeather with diffrent poses? Please leave a comment down below and say what needs to be said I can't fix or adjust things if no one speaks up XD

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Nico Morrow

I'm no artist or designer, so I'm not sure how much my suggestions will help, but I'll try. Olga has a pretty large staff, so you may want to position her up top of the title, or somewhere where her staff doesn't get in the way of other characters. If characters like Alicia and Claudia are using swords, make sure the designs for the swords are different, for example Alicia having a short sword (and maybe a shield? if you want to add one) and Claudia having a zweihander or claymore-make their styles of fighting distinct, or reflective of game play. Finally, I know this is a sketch, but Kaguya's talismans seem a little rounded at the edges. You should make sure they are completely rectangular in the final draft, and maybe add some Japanese characters on them when your done. I hope these are some helpful suggestions.

lionheartxiii

For Origa I would postion her up higher if not for the fact thats where she is on the Original Title Screen for the Original VN and I want the title to be a mirror emulation of it, I can always remove the staff if its too much, or it maybe erased when I add the Castle, Alicia never used a Shortsword and shield in both the VN and Anime just a shortsword only, Claudia did use a Claymore but I kinda reversed their rolls with Claudia being a Tank like character where Alicia is more of Speedy DPS hitter, I think I'll make a poll about it and ask you guys, for Kaguya yeah its just a placeholder and plan to add Kanji to them when I do the linework and coloring. So from what I gather make another Draft of this pic? I can do Sketches NP they only take about 45min maybe a hour to do so I can get them done super fast.

Nico Morrow

Nah, I honestly think this is a good draft. I was just giving some suggestions, since I really don't have anything to say against the sketch. If Claudia is a tank, maybe having her use a sword and shield would make more sense, like a paladin.

lionheartxiii

Based on votes so far and Evidence by Sazabi it looks like Claudia dose use a 2H weapon, though to be fair I based Claudia off of Beatrix from FF9 in terms of combat abilities and in that Beatrix uses a 2H sword (Granted its 1H but shes uses it 2H), Plus peeps seem pretty ok with giving Alicia a Shield like a Buckler or Targ and it makes sense too