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Here were are with yet another installment of The Fall.

Chapter 15 available for download. 

Have fun people!

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IgnisHeart

Nice plot progression. When do you think we'll see chapter 16?

ichaichasennin

Chapter 16 and 17 are going to be released either by the end of December or the beginning of January. My primary focus right now is Gamer Night. Strangely enough, plot driven stories are easier to write for me than smut focused ones. Crazy, right?

IgnisHeart

God, so long. I'm going to go nuts waiting. Can't wait :)

IgnisHeart

How many chapters you think?

jmspikey

oh man till the end of December huh? ah well they do say patience is a virtue

Monstermash

Will gamer be updated this month?

ichaichasennin

Absolutely. Should have two chapters done in about a week.

Eternity Smut

While I love the part were fat guy just went "So if you wanna Saber? Because you can count on me." I hope to seen a actual progression to the plot, like what has Rin been doing outside of fucking everything. Is she getting any traction with her plan to remove Shirou's 'kidnap on sight' issue. Because currently if feels as if nothing is working or Rin's action isn't getting any movement with her plan at all or at the very least it's not being shown. Hopefully we get more nasu males involved in the action instead of some randoms that will inevitably forgotten, and not plot relevant. At this point we only have the fat guy and male MC as the plot relevant 'guys' of the story.

ichaichasennin

Rin is still working on that angle, though the actual resolution of the issue with Shirou is more relegated to the various endings (Bad, True, Good) and several epilogues.

Memememe

Hm. Just a thought, but what would happen if Grey, the Saberface that is El-Melloi’s righthand woman, was around?

ichaichasennin

None, really. Her character is inconsequential to these events.

Memememe

Ah. Well, I shall just pretend that Grey is off being sluttified elsewhere, then. Cheers.

Loves2Spooge

Surprised Zelretch aint made an appearance yet even for the sake of trolling her, or maybe he is behind scenes, torturing poor Shirou with portals to force him to view what Rin has been up to while giving unwanted commentary like Jim Ross of WWE. 'Bawh God, he's tearing her in half, Shirou!' lol

Loves2Spooge

Know it's another post but damn, I just listened to this song by Matt Mason called 'E' and in similar contexts, I could see you making the latter part of this story, or even a spin-off of this story, into one helluva revenge fic for Shirou. Imagining him finding out Rin and Saber's betrayal even after what he's done for them because of them and busting out UBW on the Clock Tower and Bathomeloi and his negative emotions along with Saber's betrayal corrupting Excalibur into Excalibur Mordred (doesn't make canon sense, but hey, fanfic) or better, bringing out Clarent against Saber while he steadily turns into Avenger Shirou. Oh my god, it's getting me harder than Adamantium. Why do you inspire my imagination so much, Icha?

ichaichasennin

Revenge? Shirou? The man without pride who can't harm anyone other than to protect some else?... Yeah, not happening.

Loves2Spooge

I know, that's why I said 'imagination', dude. I'd meant it more of revenge 'for Rin and Saber' rather than himself. A guy who lives a life of almost zero accountability for himself isn't the type to go edgelord for something done to him. This Shirou would probably cuck out 'because it makes them happy and they'd be in danger because of me', disregarding the fact he's in danger because of them, and also if he wasn't aware they'd been manipulated on an instinctual level.