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The first two panels here were supposed to cap off the previous page: I think Xavier splashing more wine on Boomer after he shrugs off the initial blast works better as a punchline to close a page, but that would have made page 29 very bloated. The establishing shot of the living room would have needed to be moved to the previous page, and I feel like it works better as an opening panel for a page instead of the last one.

It does give a little more room to Boomer's reaction here, he's trying to keep it together for Miles' sake but Xavier is NOT helping. There's a bit of leftover space here to show both Jenny and Miles' reactions, the latter is still somewhat passive here.

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Zeke Red

Miles being passive here like his frequent role in the bedroom. lol I love his look of concern in the last panel, and I do hope he stands up for Boomer eventually… But not before Xavier has some fun with him. Hehe