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well, as I hinted last week, it's getting dark here!

Actually, I gotta be honest, this part of Viola's story makes me feel really nervous. I feel like this can easily interpreted in all sorts of ways and may even turn controversial. I mean, this is a comic about cute catgirls and suddenly I hit you with THIS!

But I feel like it's an important aspect of Viola's character. If she was just a spoiled trendsetter, her losing her tail (even though it's just temporary) feels like such a nothing burger. But the fact that she had to stand up for herself from a very young age, was constantly watching out for herself and still got caught blind sighted...that hits hard.

It's not about the tail but about her security and safety getting shattered. After all her folks have the means to harm her and they don't play around...and I feel like that's a much better story than her falling from grace by being allergic or some random internet trolls attacking her.

Also, one note on the side, because that last panel could be seen like this. No, she has not been SAed as child. The whole 'trophy wife' thing is already screwed up as it is. I do not want to go any further than that. That's not my story to tell.

And finally, t his is also not a statement or criticism on the breeding industry in general. It's simply just a piece of fiction of a woman who struggled over gaining and keeping agency over her life and future, told through a catgirl of royalty like circumstances.

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ShadowKnightD

If it turns out the person is Naeather, shits gonna get personal real quick

Eeyore

She’s so adorable!

S-o-i-l-

Well, i think that reading your explaination text after your last chapter carry for the comprehension because, yes, i was going through what you tell us not to go. As usual, great story that we want to know more!

Xionwalker

Oh, I absolutely love when a comic like this gets deep. I'm ok with gettimg hit with meaningful arcs like this. <3

KaiserFrazer67

Wow... it's starting to get deep and dark now... do I see *gasp!* actual DRAMA coming our way!? Now I'm on the edge of my seat! Don't worry about what you think people's reactions might be, Bea. Drama is always great for character development, and gives a real depth and dimension to your characters, You want to avoid having too many characters whose personal "depth" is no deeper than a puddle in your driveway, figuratively speaking. And I apologize, but I HAVE to correct you on this, Bea... it's spelled "ACCELERATED". (Or, if it's closer to your intent, you could use the word "excelled", which would also work there.) Might want to fix that one. Usually I let minor misspellings go, but that one's pretty glaring. 😬 But you did get the other $10 words like "exponentially", "comprehension" and "opulence" correct.

Alistair Star⭐️

Oh boy. Here comes the dark side of the story. Also, I don't understand "stolen valor". And also (again), am I to assume "brood of dawn" from the first panel is misspelled and supposed to read "breed" of dawn?

GSDragonic

So, it comes again. Darkness, my old friend.

DougheGoji19

Not to worry! I think every story needs to have some element of darkness now and then. It adds some depth to the characters. On a related note: Dang it! Now I feel bad for her. Why can't I just hate her for no good reason! (I kid of course)

Philip Rauschert

I like the set up. It works nicely precisely because there is that germ of real truth behind it all. Cats were bred as status symbols and once they become humanoid, the status only increases.