Bend down to your overlords! WIP (Patreon)

This is one of the first example where I'd love to have more freedom with the dialogue. "I'll fire your sorry little butt' is ok..."I'll fire your sorry little a$$" would've been better. Simply just because 'butt' can be an insult but also be neutral or even a cute word...  'A$$' however is not only an insult but could also be a sexually charged one. It would've been so much more believable of him threatening her that way and her reaction would've got more impact too, imo.

But I'm afraid having a a character, even if he's an antagonist, openly use vulgar language could've triggered a fair amount of readers :/