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Darn, I owe you two more WIPs! I will post them, together with yesterday's sketch, later today. My apologies :(

Well, the moment we all waited for....well, at least I did XD, Hubbs meets Al. And he's pretty direct XD

His dialogue is the only big stomachache which got me worried throughout this arc. Well, not so much his dialogue but more her reactions to it. He has apparently innocent intentions and the whole thing serves a humorous situation of misunderstanding. But I really was counting on someone throwing the book at me because Ellie was way too chilled when some strange dude approaches her, complimenting her huge chest.

I still wonder if I should've put a disclaimer on the bottom of the strip to not talk like this to a woman (or anybody as a matter of fact XD)

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Pequod

Dripping with irony. She is, of course, just who Hubbs is looking for. Thanks to Sedine's good intentions being executed in such an extreme make-over, Hubbs sees "Al" rather than Ellie. He is able to speak with "Al" and take him to the field of play without sweating profusely, becoming tongue tied or running away. It is a great strip. Moving from the long shot of the mall to Ellie and Hubbs is very effective, and I like our last look at Sedine peeking over Ellie's shoulder. Best of all, we are in what promises to be a lengthy, ongoing story arc. While I love a good gag, it is the stories that really got me hooked.

Nick Klepac

Love Ellie's look in panel 3. The fact that he is talking to her without sweating an blushing over rode everything he said. She probably didn't even hear the words and if she did, she ignored it.