But you never got ME chocolate! WIP (Patreon)

I think I mentioned it somewhere before, so please forgive me if I repeat myself ^^

As you may noticed, in the beginning of the strip Sedine was rather bitchy and screamed too much. Strange thing, I wasn't too aware of it until my husband pointed that out and suggested to tone her down a bit.

Well, I didn't want to turn Sedine around too much overnight. So I decided to do it in rather small steps thru out following strips and stories.

This is actually a good example how the writing did change due to that. 

In the first draft, Sedine was very negative, bitchy and angry towards Sam. When I look back at this, I do feel sorry for him ^^"

In the revision I turned her anger more into frustration and Sam's tiredness into surprise over her overreaction. Well, in the end, to give the strip a bit more warmth, I decided to change Sam's reaction into sympathy.

After all, Sedine is just being Sedine and he knows that she's not acting this way out of viciousness.

Honestly, I'm very happy that I changed that strip. On one side I do enjoy Sedine’s emotional antics. But I don't want that people think she is abusive or too much of a bitchy person. After all, that's not what the character or this strip is about :<

Anyway, hope you like it ^^