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them cuddling was super necessary for the plot...no really 😇

OK, but seriously. stun guns don't knock you out. they tense up your muscles and paralyze you for a short amount of time (although I read that lotsa people woke up with a sore body the next day, even though they were able to properly move the night before, after being hit with a taser). I kinda wanted to portray that with Walter. As in, he kept it together until Reina, the last thread was neutralized, his muscles just gave in too.

Also, I'm not sure if you can count someone's pulse without a clock like this. But I thought the whole scene was kinda cute and wholesome overall.

Walter might be late at time, but her cares. and that's what I wanted to show overall ^^

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Alistair Star⭐️

Well, that scary chapter is finally over. On to the next.

Tactical Bagels

“Too bad your soul is nasty.” I hope she’s staggering away to a burn unit. Chads hope people someday call them a Walter.

FriskaDraws

So happy that this chapter is coming to a close, but I feel like this shows us more the strength of their bond. Jack talks smack about Walter but he cares for him all the same.

GSDragonic

Nothing like a brotherly bond.

Michael Minnott

It's nice to see you delve into the bond between Jack and Walter.

Serra Britt

This was a sweet ending to a scary chapter. And yes, you can count someone's pulse this way, though it's not likely to be as accurate as using a second-hand on a watch.