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And the last three pages of the third 'Katzen' chapter ^^

This was actually not the original ending. Originally I had Walter tell a humorous (and not 100% accurate) retelling of the night before. but after contemplating it a bit...I felt it might make Walter a bit look like an ass. I mean, he wouldn't tell jack that he got roofied, instead he got drunk and got into a fight...which is....not really a good lie by the end either.

So instead I decided to have Jack be in control of his experience...by him jumping to (the wrong) conclusion and not inquire any further about the incident (well, ignorance is a bliss). I'm sure he knows that something bad had happened to him...but decides to dismiss it for a less concerning incident...hence he's more friendly (and thankful) for Walter's presence. If he truly believes he got sick from a contaminated drink, he'd probably be bitching at Wally XD

Anyway, thanks for reading. I will take a week long break (maybe two weeks) since I'm really, really behind. But early November I start posting the Bonus 'Katzen' chapter. So stay tuned ^^

  

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Alistair Star⭐️

Wow. That ended...better than I thought. Well, except for the whole "not telling him" thing. I still say he should.

Serra Britt

Wally is really put on the spot here, but yeah I think he should tell the truth... :P

RaynRaynGoAway

I think letting Jack have control of the ending scene was the right call! You get to address Walter's struggles with the truth while preventing the end of the chapter from being weighed down too heavily. I hope he eventually comes clean though. That aside, messy haired Jackie HITS DIFFERENT and I'm all for it. 😳

Eeyore

Sometimes ignorance is bliss…