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Hey everyone!

I just finished part 1 of chapter 82 and handed it over to my editors. I'm making a start on part 2, and all being well, I should be able to finish the chapter by about Wednesday.

I hope you guys had a nice weekend!

Tefler

Comments

Jim lynch

Looking forward to it tefler

Landon bailey

Are we still waiting for 81 to go final? If so, no problem.

Mjk154

Keep up the good work Tef. Thank. You. For all the love you put into TSM

Robert P Heck

Great job and thanks for all the chapters before and to come. Tefler you're the Man.

Timtom12

Working over the weekend? What dedication! Thank you!

Michael Davila

Can't wait, I have enjoyed this story and look forward to seeing what happens next.

Grimlakin

Awesome work Tefler. Keep the love of writing so you can do what you love!

Steve

Thanks Tef.

Big Dude

As they might say "Spank you very much". On another note... With all the space debris out there John, Dana and Calara could target practice Dana's weapons improvements on Drakkar ship parts. Just a thought!

Joshua Spencer

Wow, blazing through this chapter. Maybe we get to see what Faye does. I just hope I can handle it.

Evan

Excellent news, Tefler! I predict you'll hit a posted $1900 per chapter within 24 hours of the release of the next chapter!

keen_FlattendHedgeHog

i just realised that Alyssa is in a sense someone who wants to become john and rivals him, or who she sees he could be. yet endeavours, in her own mind to be his perceived equal. while also being unable to from her chosen perspective, while holding the greatest power out of all of them, and still because she is herself she is not one to move against john. john is fragile like a cracked crystal flute, and the core of who she chooses to be is aimed towards holding him with a loving strength. however her sexual rivalry with him that they revel in (him unconsciously) compels her to recruit, that rivalry has become a bond that gives and takes from both sides. he finds wounded birds, she recruits them and nurtures them while he rebuilds them. after all he asks most of them 'are you sure' and they have usually already decided thanks to Alyssa and her recruits emotionally priming them. there's more i thought of but i have to go, and i know that she is deeper than this. oh and parts or all of some of my comments go poof when i press enter. so... here goes... crossed fingers press ENTER

Big Dude

Or John finally takes on his progenitor self with Alyssa's assistance by her eldritch power-up returning some of those projected powers from each of his ladies and with Edraele's help!

Tefler

I had a constructive day today, even though England is in the middle of a heatwave at the moment and it's hotter than hell! I'm up to 21.5k so far. :-)

Benj

Master Laurent report that the internet was originally developed as a system that could survive a nuclear attack. I wonder whether John's telepathy can do the same with Alyssa (i.e., impregnant her with a thought). This way his memories survive for his next reincarnation. John can already change their bodies by thinking, why not make babies the same way, like a backup storage drive?

Warren Thomas

In Australia its only called a heatwave after 3 days of 38 C degs

hans kelder

keep up the good work Tef.

Master Laurent (edited)

Comment edits

2026-09-07 11:00 Good Point from Lit comments - Sakura cooling the weapons, that would be a great justification for the MECH verses another Raptor. as pointed out, she could have some very big weapons that would otherwise be unfeasible that she could allow for a steady rate of fire on such a small platform for something that would normally be on a Cruiser class ship.
2017-06-20 11:54

Master Laurent (edited)

Comment edits

2026-09-07 11:00 That is Correct. However with the space on the Invictus I have already been thinking that with the new Projen Power Couplings and with Dana Building more power cores that part of the retrofit would be to add 4-6 more Nova Lances if space provided. That would give them almost continuous fire capabilities. If I remember correctly, Nova Lance Firing Cycle is 10 Seconds charge, 10 second Fire, 30 Second Cool Down = 50 Second Cycle time. With 6 you should be able to provide almost continuous fire. If/when Dana is able to figure out the Quantum Flux Cannon a couple of the Lances could be replaced with Flux Cannons. Also with Sakura in the MECH that provides a hell of a mobile battle platform Wondering if Dana could create a “Mini Nova Lance that is only 10M Long for the Raptor and Valkyrie or like Jedi Kahn has speculated that the Drakkar weapons are mini- quantum flux cannons that get the Dana upgrade and the Sakura cooling would be awesome in a large battle. First with the speed upgrades on the Valkyrie and the power and plating upgrades it would be one big surprise. And we still know nothing about the BSP enhanced Drakkar shields. Given the possibilities I can see the future of the Invictus II. A little bit off because Dana still has to figure out the info she learned from the Legacy and the chemistry involved, however, I think that she will have no problem sucking that info out of John. I can see the Invictus II being the same length as the Invictus to provide the same maneuverability, however, cylindrical like the BSP ship - have a feeling this has something to do with the worm hole drive. Like the Legacy had a FTL Drive and conventional engines, I imagine the Worm Hole drive has some limitations on usage. Enough for now I am sure that Tefler already has a great plan, this is just fodder for us junkies to debate. Thank you Tefler for providing such a great platform to spark our imagination.
2017-06-20 15:58

Wookey

Any update on Ch 82 progress Tefler? It is Wednesday in some parts of the world.

Mark Hall

Y'all it's 3oclock in London right now maybe he'll have it up soon the withdrawals are so real right now

Thomas Dye

I'm Jonesing dude, check update 5 times in last hour

Master Laurent

This is worse than waiting for your "dude" to drop off the goods if you know what I mean. It has been a long time since I have done that, however, I can still remember the wait and this is so much worse!!!!! Like I said in the past, we are all becoming Junkies to Teflers Drugs!!!!!

Morris Crawford

nope this is worse then waiting for 2 pink lines lol.

Master Laurent

It is almost 4:30 UK Time, late afternoon can go up to 6 if I am not mistaken!!! To me 6pm is evening. 5 is early evening or late afternoon. And this is all in fun, no pressure on Tefler. :-)