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Three Square Meals Chapter 127 (combined) (Patreon)

Published:
2019-12-12 00:59:00
Edited:
2019-12-18 22:22:14
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2026-06
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Hey everyone!

I've added both halves of the chapter together and done one editing pass. Let me know if you spot anything wonky and I'll fix it asap!

I hope you enjoy the completed chapter!

Tefler

P.S. You should have only been charged once for this chapter. This post is free.

Comments

CJ Mora

Thanks, Tef!

Hendrix Morton

Thank you sir... Hope your feeling better, and that NewTef is doing well...

Mjk154

thanks Tef

Steve

Thanks!

rich ed

A fantastic chapter. Thank you good sir.

Gavin

Fantastic thanks!

Steve

Liked it a lot!

Kensyi

Cliffhanger.... Arrrrgggghhhh

Austin

DAMN! Way to leave the chapter off! Can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks Tefler!

cittran genericlastname

Found one error -- you used the word 'brevity' at one point, but given the context, I'm fairly certain you meant 'levity' instead. Brevity means shortness, whereas levity means humor or lighthearted jokes.

GDay (FMS)

Thank you, your work and dedication is greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful Christmas, especially with Tef junior. Hopefully chapter 128 for a new years eve present for us all????

3Phayz (FMS)

Oh, man... we have wait until next year for a new chapter!

Risu3007

Damn cliffhanger!

Arrowglass

What an INCREDIBLE ending to this chapter...PURE TEFLER...!!!

Thanatos95

Little one should definitely get a body, she is John and Faye's daughter after all. She should probably get an actual name too.

Lawrence Hyde

Tef: “We’re getting through them as fast as we can,” the blonde said earnestly. “Cathy reckons will [we'll] be finished with the personal claims by Thursday.”

prsstarid

I am wondering if John's final psychic attack against the Kirrix was noticeable to Rahn or any other Progenitor? Kind of like a psychic beacon.

Kinky-Kong-Keith

Damn! I'm so glad I only discovered this story only a month ago, you really know how to hook us and keep us thrashing with these cliffhangers. This is torture! I can't wait to see where this goes. P.S. - Is it just me, or has Dana eclipsed even Alyssa as John's one true love at this point? Their relationship had the most emphasis and concentration for these last few chapters, and it just elevated even more this chapter.

Carl Doerter

You son=of- a "buck!" What a job! Great! I at the time only had the first part of this chapter and sent that part concerning Faye to my wife figuring that you had at least given or thrown her a "bone"

Carl Doerter

Her reply was "He isn't safe yet, but this is a good beginning :)" Concerning both parts, you did good! My wife and I enjoyed the part about the "southern fried chicken" sandwich. Nice touch. Stay healthy and "Keep on, keepin on!"

prsstarid

Hey Tefler in the last scene you said "As he studied the felled creature, he was reminded of Kirzuxa, the ancient Hive Queen he had encountered on the Vairun’s homeworld. " But didn't John encounter her on the Mhoirad homeword? When he was in her mind he saw other civilizations she personally destroyed like the Vairun and Naygari.

a Norman knight

Tefler, great chapter! I found a couple suggested edits for Chapter 127, as follows: Page 50: making sure that the ferocious-looking weapon was slotted near(t)ly into the brackets.; Page 61: The four Nymphs look(ed) awestruck as they watched Calara systematically dismantle the Kirrix fleet.; As always, if you disagree, I completely understand. Good luck with Chapter 128. Thank you and Cheers!

Kris

With every chapter you leave me like Noah in Oliver Twist, please, sir, I want more. I've read and re-read now three times.. It's better with each read. Thanks for the hard work so far.

Jerry Seeger

Spoilers, dude! I guess I don't need to watch War Monastery III then. Battle-sister Emmanuelle was my favorite.

Nonconformist

THIS IS A COMPLAINT--. Ok, I always wait for the complete chapter before I read a post. So I waited until the 2nd half was posted, it just wasn't combined into the final chapter 127. I read 127 part 1 and 2 and 2 ended at Alyssa feeling Johns fury over the bond. As far as I knew that was the complete chapter. If I had not gone over all the comments this afternoon I would have missed the reference to something that wasn't in what I thought was the complete chapter. PLEASE TEFLER when you update your post please share when you add more to the chapter ( I know you usually do but this time it was omitted ). This would help those of us that wait for the complete chapter to read it. It would be confusing when 128 comes out to find I am lost as soon as I started to read. Regardless I sincerely love the story and can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you.

prsstarid

Man I feel sorry for whoever has to go into all those ships and release the Trankarans. There are 1.25 million (1.7 million x75%) who are infected and caged/tied up and are going to have to take a dump at the same time after John obliteration of the Kirrix unless they still have to have the sonic procedure. The smell is going to be terrible. Bring on the bio hazard suites and oxygen tanks.

Kensyi

So I am re reading the entire chapter as a whole this time, and I really can't wait for Baen'thelas to get back to Maliri space

Hinterlands Man

I don’t think anyone else noticed this yet. “ The gravity well was displayed in concentric circles, the astral hazard disrupting hyper-warp travel for light years in every direction.” I sympathize with the desire to avoid more tactical units of measure like kilometers or whatever, but an interdiction gravity well light years in radius seems a bit much.

eclipse

Getting a 404... attachment not found...

yoda

working in the UK

Nonconformist

To everyone who only read part 1 and part 2 Tefler added quite a bit more to the story when he combined them on Dec 11 so be sure to read the chapter after it was combined

jerry661

another cliff hanger

Kensyi

Can we please stop with cliffhanger endings?

Who Me

But - did that also kill the larva in the Trankarans?

brian mangerson

holy shit that last line. He is now on the same path as the evil fucking this I. The astral that controls all the of progenitors

Chris Hetherington

I think I have watch to much anime, I really like the idea of cute female robot maids all line up to welcome John home. The problem with grubs: They are kirrix children, is John any better then the kirrix if he just kills them all? The programing John’s fighting would have him kill them all and thinking nothing of it. Kirrix are evil because any who did not want to be evil had die out long go. How long does it take a grub to grow up? If Alyssa become their queen John would have a army that he could put in harm way. Unless they become sexy bug girls... their reproduction system does need changing. In some bug colony the works are all female. If you think about it the kirrix are screwed. Do what Alyssa said and slowly die out from old age or not and get wipe out sooner.

TranceR

I’m very surprised. I’ve been waiting for John to start using his power. He gave the girls their power but he still has all of there's. Good to see him step up instead of hiding behind the crew

Steve Chatterton

The way I understand the story to date is that, John is passed out in the astral plane and if he reacts anything like Dana did when she maxed out her Eldritch powers, we can expect a 14 hour nap. Other than Athena having her way with him, what else could happen to him, besides just about anything. Could the Ashanath run protective duty? Would Irrilith, Alyssa or Edreale have to camp out in the astral with him? Or do we think he snapped back into his physical form before he blacked out

Jammus1

Oh my god! Talk about a cliff-hanger!!!

ClarasBestFriend

I am on my way to London for a company holiday party and would LOVE another half-chapter to read during flights and such! Just saying!

prsstarid

I had been reading some comments on the Lit site and someone posted something interesting and I wanted to see if there had been some previous discussion about it. The point they made was that they though the buried object on Karron was the shroud device and that it was made by the Achonin but for what purpose we dont know yet. What are your thoughts on this?

Arrowglass

I wonder how the Enshunu fit into all of this. When they saw John and referred to the "old Masters," makes you wonder when the Enshunu served Progenitors...why they fear them but seem to be free of them...what part did they or do they play in all this? They wear cloak and stay covered...why...and how old is their civilization?

Jedi Khan

Happy 4th Anniversary Tefler! Four years to the day since you joined Literotica and submitted the first chapter! December 18, 2015 to December 18, 2019! Here's to many more years to come!

Arrowglass

Well wishes on your anniversary and to you and yours for the Holiday Season!!!

Kensyi

We don't know that Mael was the first Progenitor he could have been the second one, they didn't seem to give a time line as to when they were attacked only that it happened around these times, but what if those were just assumptions being made.

Kurt Robertson

Did anybody else catch that a gravity wave can I use to destroy an entire fleet?

citymorgue2 CM2

"There are thousands of Trankaran lives at stake". Werent There millions taken in the last chapter? Sorry if it's been covered already. Only new and havent had time to read through all the comments. Wow what a finish. John just annihilated a million kirrix from existence? Dark stuff. They totally deserve it though.

RedB

I only joined less than 3 weeks ago. So glad I did. Thanks Tefler and wish your Dad all the best, from Australia. Cheers.